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Hihi. I'm writing the edits for Siren's story here, if this isn't allowed, mods, please tell me. |
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Darkseeker
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Caspar jumps back up as someone shoots sleep darts at him. : Caspar jumps up as someone shoots tranquilizer darts at him. |
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Lightbringer
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Darkseeker
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They did nothing to bring him down as his fur glows brightly and he lunges at the shooters despite the pain he felt for his brother.: The darts did nothing to bring him down as his fur glowed brightly, dangerously even. He lunges at the shooters despite the sharp pain he felt for his brother. ( These edits will also contain the book in my writing style as well. Of course, don't put it in if you don't like it.) |
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Lightbringer
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Vaxentines said:
They did nothing to bring him down as his fur glows brightly and he lunges at the shooters despite the pain he felt for his brother.: The darts did nothing to bring him down as his fur glowed brightly, dangerously even. He lunges at the shooters despite the sharp pain he felt for his brother. ( These edits will also contain the book in my writing style as well. Of course, don't put it in if you don't like it.)
Lol, I'll put mostly all of the edits in there since I'm just getting back into art and writing and its been a while so my wording isn't as good anymore :) |
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Darkseeker
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I'll be taking a break from this until about 1230 gt. |
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Lightbringer
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Vaxentines said:
I'll be taking a break from this until about 1230 gt.
Alright ^^ I'ma draw for a few hours then :3 |
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Spring Month: 3 
Night 
Flood Moon: 
