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Apollo only had like 1 other axanthic pup if im not mistaken
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Kneecap stealer
... welp :')
Oh well lol, at least you got one
even though that would have been quite a cursed bloodline lol
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Don't mind me seeing the word impulse and thought you watched Impulse... my soul briefly left my body...
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I left again T^T
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Yup, lovely looking wolf you got^^
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Boe
I literally put hundreds of apples into getting an Axanthic from him and only got one from accidentally breeding him to his daughter >·> I also spent a few hundred on Ghost face

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Isle of Gold - CommentsMarch 23, 2024 10:21 PM


Zeraphia

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Hello hello! To kinda keep the actual story unhindered, comments can go here! Thank you!

Story Link: https://wolfplaygame.com/forums.php?f=45&t=90323


Edited at March 23, 2024 11:27 PM by Zeraphia
Isle of Gold - CommentsMarch 24, 2024 05:36 PM


distant-lands

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i only have read the first chapter so far but MY GOD?? the way you perfectly set the scene is so good, i could picture exactly where Varian was and how he was feeling D: so goood, i can't wait to impulse read all of it right now
Isle of Gold - CommentsMarch 24, 2024 05:37 PM


Zeraphia

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OH Geez XD
well, I definitely welcome feedback! Help me get better in writing. :3
imma... go eat dinner. XD
Isle of Gold - CommentsMarch 24, 2024 05:51 PM


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i'm not a writer myself, just an avid reader so feedback is not my forte xD it looks great to me though! i especially like how you seperate the speech from the other text so it's easier to read.
Isle of Gold - CommentsMarch 24, 2024 08:33 PM


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I'm glad! I remember reading somewhere a long time ago that when someone new speaks, you put in a new paragraph. Since I've wanted to be an author I picked up the habit and haven't let it go since!

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