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Hmm, is Illon's POV before Amel's scene starts? |
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Technically, yeah. But I'm not sure which way is better organization/storytelling wise lol |
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Okay, I would probably switch to Illon's POV again for a second then, or else change around the setup and have Amel's whole POV first and then Illon's. I did that with Bella's and Esta's/Ambrose's POV in my last post to give Sal time to react too, but really, it just depends on what you're writing in Amel's POV if you're able to change that or not, so switching back to Illon's for a second is probably fine if you can't. Hope that helps! :D |
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How I have it set up is fine- I was leaning towards going ahead and switching to Illon's, just for suspense and so the timing wouldn't be too messed up sooo- Yeah. |
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Okay, a quick update on character arcs because I finally have somewhat of an idea about what I'm doing, lmao - -Ambrose has just started his corruption arc (also known as the part where he starts to go clinically insane-) -Karma's starting to slowly ease into their redeeming arc (though it'll take... a long while.) -Agnar's mostly just chilling right now, but his corruption arc could start soon depending on how things play out (his trigger for this arc will be reliant on Eni, Amel, and/or Blair.) -Esta won't really change much other than starting to break down a little as things get worse -Isabella may start a corruption arc, but I'm really not sure yet. It all depends on how things go with Salen's corruption and with what her and Esta end up arguing about later on. On the other hand, she may start a heroine arc. Yayyy! Loose plans! XD |
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Haha, here are updates on mine then lol - -Salen is slowly easing into her corruption arc. -Illon is in a very precarious position, they could either resume their corruption arc or start the journey towards redemption. -Amel is starting his redemption arc. -Blair won't change too much.
-Eni is also in a precarious position, they'll be having their arcs simultaneously though, haha. - I'll get my post out sometime tonight lol |
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Awesome! Also, enjoy my post! :D |
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I realized I didn't edit my auras yesterday so I just did that |
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