Wolf Play : Criticism?

11:11:42 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

also what power sonds cool for a oc(a Kitsune+ estern dragon+Phoenix ) Ash
Glass
Magma
or other(please give me ideas again pm me

11:06:37 Kaos || Kháos

xD Sounds about right. She is! Sweetest person I've known in my life. We all try to protect her as much as we can whenever she's visiting us.

11:06:11 He/They pronouns

Moonfall,
Yes

11:05:49 Many moons, one me

I know I should sleep but the voices in my head go (rave noises here)

11:02:45 He/They pronouns

Oh- I have 1000 unread pinterest notifications :p

11:00:49 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Random nausea...

10:55:06 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone up for an rp pm me please im bored
if anyone has ideas for ocs pm me I heed help with some,
or shifter/hybrid forms for some
(ex for one its mostly how should the left eye look as I want a kinda ghostly aura look to the left side
for the other hair style and stuff

10:53:21 Many moons, one me

She sounds like my mother lol, multiple appointments followed by 2-4 stores and getting something to eat on the way home and we always end up getting more than we need
(We must protect great-grandmother at all costs, she sounds so sweet)

10:51:01 Kaos || Kháos

Plus I hardly ever get out of the house besides for class, so it's nice to get fresh air and see everything.

10:48:38 Kaos || Kháos

Very. Then just when I thought we were going home to eat, my great-grandma said "let's go out to eat! I want food" and then after dinner, we ended up going to another store before getting home. Love her dearly though.

10:47:24 Many moons, one me

Kháos
Sore from store hopping?

10:45:58 Kaos || Kháos

my feet can rest again :D

10:41:35 Juicy Arm Boy

Amor
Depends

Ámor

10:38:57 Slowly coming back

Is it bad I say im relieved my fiancee's cousin blocked me?

10:36:41 Many moons, one me

I haven't listened to ymca in years but for some idiotic reason it's stuck in my head

10:34:50 Many moons, one me

Evergreen
Mood

10:33:57 Juicy Arm Boy

sleepy
But like...art

10:33:47 Andy/Kait [he/they]

What is November's event currency?

10:33:29 Many moons, one me

Goodness, I feel like that about ptarmigan feathers

10:31:26 Andy/Kait [he/they]

I have 22 winged dolls too, man...

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11:11:42 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

also what power sonds cool for a oc(a Kitsune+ estern dragon+Phoenix ) Ash
Glass
Magma
or other(please give me ideas again pm me

11:06:37 Kaos || Kháos

xD Sounds about right. She is! Sweetest person I've known in my life. We all try to protect her as much as we can whenever she's visiting us.

11:06:11 He/They pronouns

Moonfall,
Yes

11:05:49 Many moons, one me

I know I should sleep but the voices in my head go (rave noises here)

11:02:45 He/They pronouns

Oh- I have 1000 unread pinterest notifications :p

11:00:49 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Random nausea...

10:55:06 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

10:53:21 Many moons, one me

10:51:01 Kaos || Kháos

Plus I hardly ever get out of the house besides for class, so it's nice to get fresh air and see everything.

10:48:38 Kaos || Kháos

10:47:24 Many moons, one me

Kháos
Sore from store hopping?

10:45:58 Kaos || Kháos

my feet can rest again :D

10:41:35 Juicy Arm Boy

Amor
Depends

Ámor

10:38:57 Slowly coming back

Is it bad I say im relieved my fiancee's cousin blocked me?

10:36:41 Many moons, one me

I haven't listened to ymca in years but for some idiotic reason it's stuck in my head

10:34:50 Many moons, one me

Evergreen
Mood

10:33:57 Juicy Arm Boy

sleepy
But like...art

10:33:47 Andy/Kait [he/they]

What is November's event currency?

10:33:29 Many moons, one me

Goodness, I feel like that about ptarmigan feathers

10:31:26 Andy/Kait [he/they]

I have 22 winged dolls too, man...

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January 3, 2018 11:40 PM

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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo

January 4, 2018 12:21 AM

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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.

January 29, 2018 07:06 PM

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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3

January 29, 2018 10:16 PM

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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer

January 29, 2018 10:41 PM