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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg
I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~
I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>
So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~
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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose. |
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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3 |
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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1
I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.
I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.
I think it looks awesome. |
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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)
I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images. |
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