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Whoever is top 50 on every LB gets a prize so it's not a mass thing like events. It's kinda like WoW.
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it wouldn't really go with the iliad thing I was going for.
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I still have one decor pass to use XD no idea what else to get who to get stuff for
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Sir3n!
I did the egg forum by the way!
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New roleplay! -WP Click-
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Your welcome
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So for each fraction whoever is on the LB gets a prize then there's overall which is every faction.
 Jester
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Oh okay thank you
 Night Raven College
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Whoever is top 50 on every LB gets a prize so it's not a mass thing like events. It's kinda like WoW.
 Jester
02:36:08 
No I mean is it like darkseekers lightseekers each get prizes or us it everyone in one leader board
 Night Raven College
02:34:52 NRC/Night/Raven
Individual prizes meaning one per person. So ranking in LB
 Jester
02:33:47 
Are full moon celebration prizes by faction or by total?
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paws?
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off for a bit now
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@Vax im more so going for greek mythos
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-WP Click- My wolf gave birth when I came home to school! 2 other cute pups too <3
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This dude needs a better name than "voodoo" any suggestions ? -WP Click-
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pixal
it wouldn't really go with the iliad thing I was going for.
Achilles dates briseis in the iliad
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You're welcome Vax <3
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@ vax why? only the sister has the longer name (most will not unless snap Blood then kinda as Snap Gray




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Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 04:08 AM


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Seriously, don't hold back. I want to improve, and the only way to do that it with some good, honest critiques. All are wanted and very much appreciated :)



Link to my art gallery:
https://wolfplaygame.com/forums.php?f=5&t=26299&page=1

But, if you're lazy like me, here are some of my most recent artworks:
https://i.postimg.cc/5041gScN/Summer-Storm-Raffle.jpg

https://i.postimg.cc/C1TJpcMS/Xery-Ref-Sheet.jpg

https://i.postimg.cc/qvrjFbRr/Familiar-Background.jpg


Edited at July 11, 2019 04:14 AM by Wood Carve
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:22 PM


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I can give negative feedback. It’s perfect. Maybe draw each individual hair on the Animals? I donÂ’ know.

Edited at July 11, 2019 03:22 PM by CanadianGirl
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:22 PM


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I really like your art! I'd love an avatar from you
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:23 PM


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bro what
i tried to come up with some constructive criticism but i cant
your art is so perfect
like the composition, colors, background, everything
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:23 PM


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mara's pack said:
bro what
i tried to come up with some constructive criticism but i cant
your art is so perfect
like the composition, colors, background, everything


Same! My answer stands!
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:35 PM


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Your art is pretty good, I especially like the last piece (the gold field).
The main thing that stuck out and- in my opinion- doesn't seem to mesh well with the rest of the piece: is the brightness in color for the wolf(?) in the first image.

I think the only main parts that should be as bright as it is, would be: the back and the beginning of the tail. The rest should be a bit darker, since it would be in the shade.
I did notice that you added shadow around the head/front of the animal, so that's good.
Besides that, I only have two nitpicks:

-The grass along the edges of the trees are a bit too bright as well, just a hint too bright
-The rocks(?) also seem very white, rather than a more grey. That could be the type of rock, I'm unsure, but they really jumped out at me and took some attention away from the animal and fire, which I felt where the main focus points.

Aside from those minor things, again, your art is very beautiful. :)
Keep up the great work!
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:39 PM


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Thank you Mossious <3 I'll keep those in mind for the next thing I draw :D
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:40 PM


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You're welcome and best of luck to you. 8D
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 07:48 PM


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You're a super talented artist, first of all <3

I just want to say that one thing I am SUPER jealous of in your art is your backgrounds and environments. They're just so good and detailed, and pretty, and /gah/. I love em. :'D

One thing I do think that you can improve on, though, is the shading of your characters. It just looks a little too... soft and blended together, and sometimes causes them to blend in a bit too much with the background. I think just a bit more detail in your shading and a bit less smudging would make your art go a loooong way.

One other minor thing I wanted to critique, is that when making ref sheets, try to make the background color a bit more muted. On the sheet of Xery, for example, the red is a bit too bright and blends in with the red of the character, and makes it kind of hard to look at. It might benefit to desaturate the background a little bit, or make it darker/lighter, or even make it a different color entirely that just compliments the character.

That's about all I have to say. Your art is /super/ solid, and I can't wait to see you improve and have your art become more amazing in the future :D
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 07:50 PM


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Thank you Dash!! <3

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