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 Pink kitty🐈
03:25:37 Kneecap stealer
So I'm stressed
 Pink kitty🐈
03:25:14 Kneecap stealer
And this is while I'm taking care of myself, the cat, our other dog, bella, the house, and trying to make sure my husband comes home on the 20th
 Pink kitty🐈
03:24:11 Kneecap stealer
And the pain from my shoulder spread like 2 inches down my arm (still in the general area of the shoulder)
 Collar
03:22:47 Altar 🦌
Yes :] Trust :] It is 1am and Ive been so well behaved
 Pink kitty🐈
03:22:23 Kneecap stealer
We have a full blood pit bull puppy right? And lately I've been in a ton of pain but I still manage to take her ass out CoNsTaNtLy, every 30 minutes, even when she wakes up from a nap, so here I am, lying in bed trying to get through the pain until I go to the hospital later and all I smell is dog shit (I just brought her back in from almost 2 hours of being outside) and I go into the living room and all I see, is the living room is torn up and there's multiple piles of dog shit everywhere, so I'm going to clean up all the dog crap y'know? And when I'm almost done cleaning the sight and smell is too much for my weak stomach and I throw up, so I gotta take the outside trash to the dumpster later, the inside trash outside then put the outside trash in the dumpster yet again, then clean out the trash can in the living room because I threw up in it, then I gotta scrub every inch of CARPET clean so she doesn't smell her own shit anymore, all while Im supposed to keep my shoulder still and let it heal, so now Im sick, I'm mad, and I'm hurting (bad combination with me) and I remind myself this is why I hate dogs (no offense to any dog owners who might see it) so yea, my day is already stressful
 Sabbath
03:21:33 Rook
Hmm have you though?
 Collar
03:21:15 Altar 🦌
Give me paws ive been so good today
 Sabbath
03:20:10 Rook
The earthquake weather event has trapped me in explore
 Sabbath
03:10:24 Rook
Rant away
 Lurking shadows
03:03:01 
Hi
 Pink kitty🐈
03:00:51 Kneecap stealer
Guys can I rant
 Sabbath
03:00:07 Rook
good luck with the pups andy
 Andypaws
02:47:04 Andy/Kait [he/they]
-WP Click- shes in labor :]
 Pink kitty🐈
02:27:15 Kneecap stealer
Yay my nickname made it onto wild moongem
 Sabbath
02:18:04 Rook
Goodnight Moonfall c:
 Moonfall
02:12:36 Many moons, one me
Huzzah, my twins made it to sanctuary!! I think I'll just, go now. Goodnight everyone
 Moonfall
02:10:46 Many moons, one me
Ok it's now somehow 3 am for me, an hour after I said I'd go to bed.
I apparently I don't know how to go to bed/silly
 Moonfall
02:09:44 Many moons, one me
Lol
 Sabbath
02:05:12 Rook
Just... when I get to it LOL
 Sabbath
02:04:56 Rook
Hahah you feel maternal towards him. I get it though. I bought him because I feel the same way. He is so ugly and yellow and I love him and I will make him into a deadly weapon

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 Pink kitty🐈
03:25:37 Kneecap stealer
So I'm stressed
 Pink kitty🐈
03:25:14 Kneecap stealer
And this is while I'm taking care of myself, the cat, our other dog, bella, the house, and trying to make sure my husband comes home on the 20th
 Pink kitty🐈
03:24:11 Kneecap stealer
And the pain from my shoulder spread like 2 inches down my arm (still in the general area of the shoulder)
 Collar
03:22:47 Altar 🦌
Yes :] Trust :] It is 1am and Ive been so well behaved
 Pink kitty🐈
03:22:23 Kneecap stealer
We have a full blood pit bull puppy right? And lately I've been in a ton of pain but I still manage to take her ass out CoNsTaNtLy, every 30 minutes, even when she wakes up from a nap, so here I am, lying in bed trying to get through the pain until I go to the hospital later and all I smell is dog shit (I just brought her back in from almost 2 hours of being outside) and I go into the living room and all I see, is the living room is torn up and there's multiple piles of dog shit everywhere, so I'm going to clean up all the dog crap y'know? And when I'm almost done cleaning the sight and smell is too much for my weak stomach and I throw up, so I gotta take the outside trash to the dumpster later, the inside trash outside then put the outside trash in the dumpster yet again, then clean out the trash can in the living room because I threw up in it, then I gotta scrub every inch of CARPET clean so she doesn't smell her own shit anymore, all while Im supposed to keep my shoulder still and let it heal, so now Im sick, I'm mad, and I'm hurting (bad combination with me) and I remind myself this is why I hate dogs (no offense to any dog owners who might see it) so yea, my day is already stressful
 Sabbath
03:21:33 Rook
Hmm have you though?
 Collar
03:21:15 Altar 🦌
Give me paws ive been so good today
 Sabbath
03:20:10 Rook
The earthquake weather event has trapped me in explore
 Sabbath
03:10:24 Rook
Rant away
 Lurking shadows
03:03:01 
Hi
 Pink kitty🐈
03:00:51 Kneecap stealer
Guys can I rant
 Sabbath
03:00:07 Rook
good luck with the pups andy
 Andypaws
02:47:04 Andy/Kait [he/they]
-WP Click- shes in labor :]
 Pink kitty🐈
02:27:15 Kneecap stealer
Yay my nickname made it onto wild moongem
 Sabbath
02:18:04 Rook
Goodnight Moonfall c:
 Moonfall
02:12:36 Many moons, one me
Huzzah, my twins made it to sanctuary!! I think I'll just, go now. Goodnight everyone
 Moonfall
02:10:46 Many moons, one me
Ok it's now somehow 3 am for me, an hour after I said I'd go to bed.
I apparently I don't know how to go to bed/silly
 Moonfall
02:09:44 Many moons, one me
Lol
 Sabbath
02:05:12 Rook
Just... when I get to it LOL
 Sabbath
02:04:56 Rook
Hahah you feel maternal towards him. I get it though. I bought him because I feel the same way. He is so ugly and yellow and I love him and I will make him into a deadly weapon




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Critique me!May 15, 2022 07:29 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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I have no clue what I'm doing. Gallery Link

A few hours ago I was bored and decided to become an artist with no previous experience. With that being said this is my attempt to draw an OC of mine and I would like feedback. The anatomy seems a bit funky, he is supposed to be a wolf. I also colored him. For those of you that want to, you can go over and red line stuff so I can see what to fix! If you have tips on blending and colors that would be appreciated as well. I draw using Adobe Fresco, but if there are other good apps to use, let me know.

I'll link minor stuff and put the images for more important stuff so this isn't too long. Thanks :)

OC for reference(yes the oc is mine)

All image credit from here down belongs to me.

First red line

IMG-1638.jpg

First red line and outline

Altered final outline (I have no idea how I changed it this much)

IMG-1637.jpg

Colored final product

IMG-1636.jpg

Colored final product with OG lines behind it (for comparison, also I forgot to screenshot the red line that's under it. That one is in fact the original, the first red line linked at the top is the second red line I did in order to fix this. If that makes sense.)


Edited at May 17, 2022 07:49 PM by Ciao
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:21 PM


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hello! very cute character youve got there!!

ive been drawing canines/wolves in particular for going on 6(ish) years now id say, and ive learned a lot about drawing them over the years, so im here to offer a few tips (as well as some blue lines for future reference)!

so canine anatomy is very hard to explain, but the way i improved is by studying the canine body by tracing over actual photos of wolves i found online. ive found simplifying their bodies and more specifically their limbs into simple shapes and refinining from there helps a ton for anatomy improvement!

ive bluelined over your image and focused on a few different things, and ill list the links to view them below!

these are just a few quick base sketches i whipped up within like 5 minutes so theyre not perfect, but i hope theyre able to help a bit!

you have a lot of potential and im so excited to see your improvement!! if you need anything at all dont be scared to reach out to me and ill try my best to help! :)


Edited at May 15, 2022 08:26 PM by jaune
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:53 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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Thank you for the help! I can definitely see how I can improve the design more, and the blue line especially helped. For the anatomy I think tracing a real wolf would really help as well. I appreciate your critique and i'll definitely reach out if I have more questions :)
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:07 PM


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Ah- I might be of assistance here. Anatomy is quite off, /lighthearted
If I forget to add the redlines pm me I get busy lol
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:48 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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Thanks, i'll pm you^^

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