Here is part of a book I'm writing I am open to people's thoughts on my writing and on the story itself. PM me your thoughts on either my writing or the story itself
CULT
Stephan and Damien were running for their lives, they could hear them running behind them yipping and yelling. They were catching up to them. The two boys know that if they get caught by the people behind them they will die most likely cut open with their guts spilled out over the forest floor for the animals to feast on. They did not expect to be running for their lives tonight, they only wanted a video to upload to YouTube for their channel, but now they were running trying to get out of the forest as fast as they could. Stephan trips, Damien stops to help him up, and he starts running again as the yips and screams get louder. Torches from the people behind them light up the forest, the trees coming up to the two boys, They jump over roots and logs dodging trees and deep puddles. The Laughter and yells and screams were getting closer, the two boys' lives were now in danger. They finally made it out of the woods into the road. A car almost hits them, it stops and a man gets out.
Winter Month: 3 
Night 
Blizzard Moon: 
