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Lightbringer
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I vividly remember saying "Aw" while reading Cordelia's appearance when I read the mushroom hair bit! Did you write them both just for this rp though?? I didn't realized they were all from scratch!!!
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Lightbringer
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REEE. That makes me so happy to know! I love it when my writing gets people to feel emotions. I was going for that! And yeah! Cordelia and Gene are from scratch completely. Vesper is rather new and unused, I haven't written his personality yet so I guess he's technically form scratch as well? And Mara is a mix of two character I wrote for but didn't get to use in different RP's Edited at August 26, 2022 10:59 PM by Spellbound
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Lightbringer
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Oh my gosh that's awesome! I normally at least keep one character from other rps but doing almost all of it from scratch is incredible! Man, I don't think I could ever handle that.
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Lightbringer
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It's been a while since I made new human characters so. I'm doing my best on learning how to write appearances and personalities for them good. I definitely also want to make them each unique and not have the same-face syndrome you know. __________ My next personal projects I want to do are this: a snobby and bitchy character that's iconic and arguably disliked but secretly wants to change and is like this because of severe parental issues. And I am thinking a arrogant and bit of asshole character that is like this because they're afraid of rejection and reject people before they can do it to them and have severe social anxiety, and secretly can be super nice and sweet.
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Oooo that would be super cool!! I would love to see that character. I honestly really want to make a girl that acts a lot like a Mary Sue with pink hair, pink everything, and has a near perfect life with a little bitchiness and egotisticalness on the side. I think it would be really cool to give her an ark where she learns to become a really cool baddass who doesn’t give a fuck if her frilly shirt has blood, dirt, and grim on it. This is really random but I wanna do it-
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Awh. Thank you! And that sounds like a very interesting project :o _________ Also, for Cordelia and Gene. What do you think about my writing for their personalities and appearances? I am interested because I want to make sure they aren't Mary-Sue-ish or if they are it's not too much. I am also invested because I want them to be unique and interesting character :,)
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Lightbringer
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Here's the thing: Mary-Sues, while they can be pretty fucking bad and annoying and stupid and all this other stuff, will only ever be equal to if not better than Anti-Sues. Make sure your character isn't over powered or some special goddess, but I would rather they be a badass goddess than a boring plank of a character.
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Lightbringer
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True. That honestly checks out. Now I need to know by your analysis, how do my girls check out.
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I would say they are mostly well balanced characters strictly personality speaking. They both do have their flaws and downsides to their personalities which is something hard to do. If I were to be hyper critical, I would say that Cordelia could use maybe one more flaw just to fully even her out, but it is okay to make slightly uneven characters so long as you have other characters who go the opposite way. Am I making sense by saying that...?
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Sorry for being inactive for a while but I am still here just dealing with family issues at the moment also stuff seems to be getting on the way and I truely can't wait to rp and see what this brings for my boy Seth ^^
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