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Haha, that's fair Admittedly the Garvin being comforted by Aries idea (Titled Patchwork) is the heavier one haha Fun - He'd just be a little more open about the worry and resentment on Akira's behalf probably. Definitely more of him pushing everything going on with him down in order to help Akira more too. Love that we get some Revan and Akira hurt/comfort, love those two. - Loved the song lyric thing! Very nice! Very good! |
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So far Patchwork has ~880 words and it is only just about to start picking up. It isn't too terrible at first and then suddenly it is and then the comfort comes. Woo. |
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Fair, lmao - Alright, thanks! Yeah, they're quite adorable once Akira gets over hating Revan XD - Oooo, very fun! :D I'm ~780 words into the first part of my story (Reconnecting With The Past), which is gonna be split into two parts probably just because of how much there is, and just go to Romilly reaching out, lol |
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Ooo that's all fun Patchwork has either two or three parts, depending on if I switch back to Aries' POV aftet I do Garvin's. Almost to the first POV switch now. |
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Ooo, nice I'm switching POVs for the first time in the first part, so I think it's about halfway done? We'll see, lmao |
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Nice, nice I'm about at that point too, I think Just trying to decide how mean I should be in Garvin's POV Well, I mean, where I should start with his POV... I'm leaning towards mean but that's just because I always tend to go heavy on the angst oops |
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Mean is fine with me, we love angst in this house (Even though we feel bad XD) |
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Ain't that true- Haha, great, great Get ready for a lot of angst with Garvin's POV then Uhm
Yeah Aries got quite the comfort to provide here |
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~1280 words for Aries' POV and ~400 words so far of Garvin's POV. Definitely think we might have to get a second Aries' POV with just how much I have planned but uh... We'll see. Unseen in the short story is an argument that Revan and Garvin had. It's mentioned, quite a bit, in the short story. But not at all in a 'both sides of the story' light. We'll only going to really get to know Revan's side of the story. Because Garvin's mind is mean and Revan is... Revan. So. Yeah. Oops. |
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~940 words for Garvin's part so far and I'm like... Maybe halfway done with his part? You're going to learn here just how much of an unreliable narrator Garvin is. Don't trust this guy. Anyways, uh. As heavy as the first bit of his part is, this next bit is going to get a whole lot heavier. Fun news though- You're getting a glimpse at some other stuff other than just Garvin's usual self-hatred rooted in self-worth issues. Aka, that's not the only self-hatred he has. He's versatile like that lmao - ~1795 words for Garvin and he's finally out of the self-destructive dissociative state he was in. Oops, my bad. We can finally have the comfort part though, haha Kind of |
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