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I also do coffee. Dunkin oof |
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Is this interesting for my book? Arc 1 : Introduction to the MC's & Their first day at their new school.
Them Settling In & Meeting other characters
A Day Out With The Other Students
Arc 1.5 :
First Day Of Classes And Training
Teams, Mentors & Squadrons Assigned. Meeting the Mentors/Teachers
Arc 2:
The Attack Of The Kingdom
Some students getting injured in the escape and death & oppression of the people
The Riders Escaping Arc 2.5 :
Surviving with injured children and dragons while finding out they're now declared Outlaws and are Wanted
Attacks by wild drakes & wyrven
Making their way to their allied Kingdom after taking over the naval station and stealing a large ship.
Arc 3:
Sailing the rough seas. Arguments and next move
Possible mention of a mole/traitor
They shipwreck on their allied nations coast due to a huge storm. And then them being taken in by the royal family of said kingdom. And now they have some sort of comfort and relief after all they went through. The epilogue would be the crowing of a young and villainous prince who is helping his father rule the newly captured kingdom. |
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I love it *^*
Spellbound said:
Is this interesting for my book? Arc 1 : Introduction to the MC's & Their first day at their new school.
Them Settling In & Meeting other characters
A Day Out With The Other Students
Arc 1.5 :
First Day Of Classes And Training
Teams, Mentors & Squadrons Assigned. Meeting the Mentors/Teachers
Arc 2:
The Attack Of The Kingdom
Some students getting injured in the escape and death & oppression of the people
The Riders Escaping Arc 2.5 :
Surviving with injured children and dragons while finding out they're now declared Outlaws and are Wanted
Attacks by wild drakes & wyrven
Making their way to their allied Kingdom after taking over the naval station and stealing a large ship.
Arc 3:
Sailing the rough seas. Arguments and next move
Possible mention of a mole/traitor
They shipwreck on their allied nations coast due to a huge storm. And then them being taken in by the royal family of said kingdom. And now they have some sort of comfort and relief after all they went through. The epilogue would be the crowing of a young and villainous prince who is helping his father rule the newly captured kingdom.
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Ahhh thank you! I feel like this will end up being 50 Chapters and my goal is at least 175,000 words. So 3,500 - 4,000 words per chapter. I'm just debating who's POV the book will be in since it's going to be a series. I'm calling it Project A since it's going to be set in Aibruivia |
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Hmm, it could be set on the evil prince's half-sibling (they don't know it) or the best friend of the secret half-sibling, but that's if you hadn't set the characters in stone. --- Also, did you see my new boy Calix in Imperfectly Perfect? He still a WIP though |
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WAAaaaait! I was going to have the villainous prince end up as a love interest for one of the characters that will go undercover in as a spy in the second book. But it would be so much more interesting if in addition to having the half-sibling amongst the Riders, they're also the mole and send word about the plan of a spy infiltrating the castle . So the villainous prince intends to kill said spy but instead decides to toy with them. And the best friend can be the MC. |
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Also not me planning a scene where the sunshine character who has been denying touching a weapon, goes feral over his "best friend / childhood rival " getting bitten by a venomous dragon. And so he takes a large ass war hammer and him and his dragon clear the front lines (which others have been struggling with) and busts into a castle window and has a boss fight and gets the antidote for the venom. |
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I feel like the tyrant king kept one child (evil prince) while giving up the other to a family he's close/blackmailing into raising his second child. When the family grew useless, the king killed the family while his second child was away, and ended up blackmailing his second child to work for him for the sake of keeping the family (who's already dead) alive. So, the half-sibling is the mole and doing their best to save their family. |
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DAMNNN- That's juicy as fuck. So he's working to keep his family alive when they're already dead and he doesn't know it. And so he's feeding information to the King and helped in the overthrowing of the Kingdom and keeping tabs on them. I feel like the evil prince doesn't know about this sibling, but he s gauge memories of them together, before he was rather bitter and apathetic. And so when he finds out his father would resort to such cruel and undignified matters to a blood-sibling of his, all bets are off and he's now planning to get his sibling out of this mess. He may be a cruel and mean bastard but he isn't that bad .
Cereal said:
I feel like the tyrant king kept one child (evil prince) while giving up the other to a family he's close/blackmailing into raising his second child. When the family grew useless, the king killed the family while his second child was away, and ended up blackmailing his second child to work for him for the sake of keeping the family (who's already dead) alive. So, the half-sibling is the mole and doing their best to save their family.
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Only for the king to kill the evil prince who betrayed them right in front of the missing half-sibling, which sets them off and they kill the tyrant king in the end.
Spellbound said:
DAMNNN- That's juicy as fuck. So he's working to keep his family alive when they're already dead and he doesn't know it. And so he's feeding information to the King and helped in the overthrowing of the Kingdom and keeping tabs on them. I feel like the evil prince doesn't know about this sibling, but he s gauge memories of them together, before he was rather bitter and apathetic. And so when he finds out his father would resort to such cruel and undignified matters to a blood-sibling of his, all bets are off and he's now planning to get his sibling out of this mess. He may be a cruel and mean bastard but he isn't that bad .
Cereal said:
I feel like the tyrant king kept one child (evil prince) while giving up the other to a family he's close/blackmailing into raising his second child. When the family grew useless, the king killed the family while his second child was away, and ended up blackmailing his second child to work for him for the sake of keeping the family (who's already dead) alive. So, the half-sibling is the mole and doing their best to save their family.
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