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07:52:35 and your just blue

i don't wanna get sent to the hospital, i wanna go home

07:51:15 You're just yellow

Saint

Pass out, make your nose bleed, puke, there are so many things that could get you out of ass

07:49:53 and your just blue

someone save me from class, i've been watching presentations for 3 hours. it's for my final exam but i went first and we can't leave until all 35 of us are done

The Tea Drinkers

07:49:45 Tea, Tea Queen

dang it. I was going to try to get him to 300 BE before Spring 1 when my next trainee ages up :P
-WP Click-

07:49:25 Sunny/Alastair/Sam

Zera,
Haha, yeah. Same.

07:48:48 and your just blue

nux

07:47:53 You're just yellow

Saint 🐠

07:47:11 and your just blue

hey chat

07:47:00 Medicinally Autistic

I have one last question before i do this ;-; I'm so excited

07:45:55 You're just yellow

I was honestly trying to get rid of them for the space. I have litters on the way.

07:44:37 Vah is less okay

XDD I usually bone most of the ones I get. If I find one that's kind of good or desirable and they don't get picked up after a day or so, I'll yeet them to the sanctuary

07:43:16 Sunny/Alastair/Sam

Zera,
I was so confident, too ;-;
And yeah free range is good. I honestly just retire because either way the ones I retire sanctuary wouldn't take and also it'll give me bones.

07:41:51 You're just yellow

I usually keep one that I absolutely adore and bone the rest because I like the shop

07:40:37 Vah is less okay

XDD

I've just gathered information honestly.

I find a when in doubt moment is a sanctuary moment.

07:39:59 Sunny/Alastair/Sam

I need to be here more often 😑

07:38:35 Sunny/Alastair/Sam

Oh nevermind he's a hero. Listen to Zera.

07:38:13 Vah is less okay

Nux

Ahh, hmm... maybe yeet him to the sanctuary

07:38:06 Sunny/Alastair/Sam

Nux,
To die. He is pretty, but his cp and vitals are not great. Depends on what you want for a wolf. Looks and rarity and breeding (since G5) would be good. But I'm not an expert and it depends on what you want for a wolfo.

07:37:42 You're just yellow

Vah

But his brother...

-WP Click-

07:36:12 Vah is less okay

... he may live. He's a hero, 40+ rarity AC and at least it looks like a HW.

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Somethings amiss here

June 7, 2022 02:05 PM

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Idk if it's the colors or the lines or whatever but some thing is wrong here. Can y'all help me out?

She's based on a lionfish

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June 7, 2022 02:10 PM

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She sorta looks scary

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June 7, 2022 02:22 PM

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maybe it's how her tail isn't lined but her body is? though I'm not sure if that's because of your artstyle since I've never seen your art before ^^;

though you can check if it's an anatomy issue by flipping the canvas :D

looking good btw! i like the concept :>

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June 7, 2022 02:25 PM

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I was trying to go for a cute but creepy vibe, not sure how well that came across lol

awooo said:

She sorta looks scary

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June 7, 2022 02:25 PM

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Yeah, I tend to leave lining till last cause I hate doing it and while I was doing it I realized I didn't like something

swiftystarss said:

maybe it's how her tail isn't lined but her body is? though I'm not sure if that's because of your artstyle since I've never seen your art before ^^;

though you can check if it's an anatomy issue by flipping the canvas :D

looking good btw! i like the concept :>

Edited at June 7, 2022 02:26 PM by Flower Field

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June 7, 2022 03:48 PM

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Maybe it's that dip in the tail? Looks a bit too sharp. Could also be the facial features? Seems a bit off, compared ta the rest of the art.

Edited at June 7, 2022 03:55 PM by Cinnabar Banks Pack

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June 7, 2022 03:49 PM

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I find her eyes unsettling, haha they're just so different than the art style. The only way I could explain it is if you put googly eyes over a face.

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June 7, 2022 03:50 PM

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I think the proportion of the head is slightly off? Especially in comparison to the size of their arms...

Also it might be that there isn't much of a chin, which sort of breaks up a lot of the sharper lines that you have!

I really like the premise / concept, and it looks good, just not exactly proportional to the way a body looks! <3

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June 7, 2022 04:32 PM

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Alright! Took some things into consideration and here's V2

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June 7, 2022 04:38 PM

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I like this a lot more! Her arms don't look nearly as stretched out, which (in my opinion) makes the rest of her body look a lot more proportional and less wonky! Plus the lineart and fin detailing helped a lot.

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