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I'm back. I put a bluey bandaid on the biggest bruise, and strangely enough? It helps? Like I'm not bleeding, but it does actually help it feel better
Power of suggestion 🤷

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Akira,
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Congrats!

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6 pages of supplemental tables, 10 pages of an assessment, and 2 papers later e.e finals season is certainly here

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Eternity,
Lol

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Not sure whats wrong

November 23, 2018 01:49 AM

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I made this piece today
https://i.postimg.cc/fyDhLtMB/2392-C118-DF13-4597-9-BF2-6-E23-A916-B115.png

And I cant tell whats wrong. I think it has something to do with the back legs and maybe the ears or the rib cage. It's a species I made and I can post a reference sheet of one if it helps but I really want to fix this. Ps. The tuff on the shoulder is actually where a wing used to be. It was cut off by hunters.

Thanks!

Edited at November 23, 2018 05:00 PM by Path of Stars

Not sure whats wrong

November 23, 2018 03:49 AM

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I suggest studying wolf and canine anatomy, it can go a long way.

The ears need to respond properly to the floor, so if drawing a straight line on the ground part helps to position the ears to be affected by the ground, then do it :D

The shoulder juts out, but it shouldn't. Just a tiny tuft of fur will suffice.

The closest back legs rump (the large part that connects the leg to the body) looks a bit too thin.

But other than that, its looking great so far.

Not sure whats wrong

November 23, 2018 04:49 PM

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Wood Carve said:
I suggest studying wolf and canine anatomy, it can go a long way.
The ears need to respond properly to the floor, so if drawing a straight line on the ground part helps to position the ears to be affected by the ground, then do it :D
The shoulder juts out, but it shouldn't. Just a tiny tuft of fur will suffice.
The closest back legs rump (the large part that connects the leg to the body) looks a bit too thin.

But other than that, its looking great so far.

Thanks! That makes sense.

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