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Also thank you. She loved them too.

02:39:36 Axan hoarder

Oh. Have fun at church

02:38:33 Vash | Xy

Cy
Church
And I absolutely love those :00 they're so cute I love em
I'll definitely dm you about art sometime<33

02:35:04 Axan hoarder

Xyxy
Whats starting?

02:34:40 Axan hoarder

Xyxy
I dont remember if I showed you or not but these are 2 tattoo designs I made for one of my coworkers cause she asked me to design her a tattoo. She said she is gonna get both
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02:34:29 Vash | Xy

I gotta go it's starting hope to catch you sometime again xx

02:34:14 Vash | Xy

Hey
Cycy<33 yes I do🤭

02:32:23 Axan hoarder

Xyxy
Hey. You know i love doing art.

02:25:41 Vash | Xy

I should get more art >:)

02:20:01 Vash | Xy

Heyy

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Omgim so happy. They were super nice and understanding. I got my axanthic back. Im so happy 😊

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I see my partner in 48 minutes. So freaking hyped ohh my god

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I’m back (sorry I kinda sidetracked lol that what you get with an ADHD brain)

01:53:36 Axan hoarder

Yall im praying this pack will be nice and let me have my axanthic back. I boarded with another pack for a couple days and they put him up for 5 mush for me to pick up and did it when I was offline. Im o sad. 😭

Eno

01:38:32 ancient, mmm thighs

Ew not the zebra pelt

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Not in any of the generation lines at all >.>

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How in the hell-

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What in the hell-

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02:40:04 Axan hoarder

Also thank you. She loved them too.

02:39:36 Axan hoarder

Oh. Have fun at church

02:38:33 Vash | Xy

Cy
Church
And I absolutely love those :00 they're so cute I love em
I'll definitely dm you about art sometime<33

02:35:04 Axan hoarder

Xyxy
Whats starting?

02:34:40 Axan hoarder

Xyxy
I dont remember if I showed you or not but these are 2 tattoo designs I made for one of my coworkers cause she asked me to design her a tattoo. She said she is gonna get both
-Click-
-Click-

02:34:29 Vash | Xy

I gotta go it's starting hope to catch you sometime again xx

02:34:14 Vash | Xy

Hey
Cycy<33 yes I do🤭

02:32:23 Axan hoarder

Xyxy
Hey. You know i love doing art.

02:25:41 Vash | Xy

I should get more art >:)

02:20:01 Vash | Xy

Heyy

02:05:17 Axan hoarder

Omgim so happy. They were super nice and understanding. I got my axanthic back. Im so happy 😊

Collar

02:02:35 Altar 🦌

I see my partner in 48 minutes. So freaking hyped ohh my god

The Rat Lord

01:58:38 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

I’m back (sorry I kinda sidetracked lol that what you get with an ADHD brain)

01:53:36 Axan hoarder

Eno

01:38:32 ancient, mmm thighs

Ew not the zebra pelt

01:34:40 Tito

Pink
Not in any of the generation lines at all >.>

01:32:17 Kneecap stealer

How in the hell-

01:28:49 Tito

-WP Click-
What in the hell-

12:46:51 Kneecap stealer

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12:44:44 Kneecap stealer

1893/1900

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM