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Well I'm off bye
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Your welcome, Eas(:
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Just popped like 5 wolves this is the only one I'm keeping but I'm not comparing too hard. She's awesome
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He looks like his dad but I'm not mad because I love the coat.
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He looks like his dam!!
 Night Raven College
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Sweet
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I...
 Night Raven College
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A gifted apple* oops
 Night Raven College
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To use a *
 Night Raven College
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To use -Click- apple ( if your talking about the green apple with a ribbon) you go to Barter>Apples> Breeding Items
 MLadySkylar
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I was wondering the same thing
 Easnem
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So how do I use a gifted apple?
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First pup I've bred that I'm actually keeping
 Sweet Valley Rescue
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brachycephalic?
 Sweet Valley Rescue
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huh
 Æthelwood
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After I said that I found the stoat immediately.
 Æthelwood
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I need to find that goddamn stoat for this stupid quest
 Ruby Waters
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Nero
dangg :')
 Nero
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I did have about 7 toucan feathers just i gifted about 4 away :,)

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 Night Raven College
07:02:45 NRC/Night/Raven
Well I'm off bye
 Night Raven College
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Your welcome, Eas(:
 Easnem
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Thank you raven!
 dogwood
06:55:16 pup
Just popped like 5 wolves this is the only one I'm keeping but I'm not comparing too hard. She's awesome
-WP Click-
 Night Raven College
06:50:35 NRC/Night/Raven
-WP Click-
He looks like his dad but I'm not mad because I love the coat.
 Sweet Valley Rescue
06:49:45 Anna/Jewel
He looks like his dam!!
 Night Raven College
06:49:20 NRC/Night/Raven
Sweet
Cute
 Sweet Valley Rescue
06:48:40 Anna/Jewel
-WP Click-
I...
 Night Raven College
06:42:10 NRC/Night/Raven
A gifted apple* oops
 Night Raven College
06:41:34 NRC/Night/Raven
To use a *
 Night Raven College
06:41:25 NRC/Night/Raven
To use -Click- apple ( if your talking about the green apple with a ribbon) you go to Barter>Apples> Breeding Items
 MLadySkylar
06:30:45 P'Sky/Sky-kun
I was wondering the same thing
 Easnem
06:11:01 Eas
So how do I use a gifted apple?
 Æthelwood
05:55:23 Moth | Yule
-WP Click-

First pup I've bred that I'm actually keeping
 Sweet Valley Rescue
05:55:19 Anna/Jewel
-WP Click-
brachycephalic?
 Sweet Valley Rescue
05:53:23 Anna/Jewel
-WP Click-
huh
 Æthelwood
05:32:27 Moth | Yule
After I said that I found the stoat immediately.
 Æthelwood
05:30:39 Moth | Yule
I need to find that goddamn stoat for this stupid quest
 Ruby Waters
05:25:35 Ruby
Nero
dangg :')
 Nero
05:24:41 Winterfell
I did have about 7 toucan feathers just i gifted about 4 away :,)




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Critique?July 30, 2018 05:59 AM


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I was just messing around and I made this:
https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png
And this:
https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png
If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background
I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie
Critique?July 30, 2018 02:36 PM


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Horse
I can't see it
But the D ring for your bit is way too big
And the rest of the bridle is way to small
Critique?July 30, 2018 02:46 PM


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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.
https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or
https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png
(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:
Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:
https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.
There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°
Critique?July 30, 2018 03:58 PM


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Thanks Astro and Midnight!
The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black
I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.
I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD
Critique?July 30, 2018 06:33 PM


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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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