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11:10:40 Acorn (She/Her)

11:10:24 Acorn (She/Her)

Vax
Ooooh crochet! Happy birthday to your friend

Okay bye now chat

11:02:40 Song

Husky 2 dye
-WP Click-

11:01:56 Song

Goodness

11:01:32 a rock in your shoe

cornmuffin
pretty good.
its my friend's birthday, I'm crocheting her present

11:00:09 Winter

Snow
Yup that exactly, atleast 4 people I know have had it and survived it luckily

10:59:48 Winter

I need to get my finger out and start advertising this dude properly -WP Click-

10:59:40 Song

Meningitis?!
Stiff neck, highish fever?

10:57:46 Winter

Song
For me its meningitis

10:57:22 Winter

Acorn
I did not know that thank you :D

10:53:07 Song

What was the last flu the cool kids where sharing around at schools & campuses?

10:49:56 Acorn (She/Her)

Vax
I'm good, probably not here too much longer as I need to eat lol
How bout you?

10:49:18 a rock in your shoe

corn muffin
yello
howre you

10:48:52 Acorn (She/Her)

Yello Vax

10:48:39 Acorn (She/Her)

@[Eye of Eternity]
If no one else chooses one, Ralphie

10:48:35 Acorn (She/Her)

Winter
Ah, misc is close enough though :D

Oh also, if you click the apple or mushroom icon it takes you to barter as a little shortcut :D

10:47:11 a rock in your shoe

hello fellow goblins

Eye of Eternity

10:46:13 tern | they/he

i have to go eat so tag or pm me but somebody choose one more guy -Click- -Click-

10:45:03 Winter

Acorn
Nope your right pack expansion xD

10:42:07 Acorn (She/Her)

Winter
It feels like it could be either lol

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11:10:40 Acorn (She/Her)

11:10:24 Acorn (She/Her)

Vax
Ooooh crochet! Happy birthday to your friend

Okay bye now chat

11:02:40 Song

Husky 2 dye
-WP Click-

11:01:56 Song

Goodness

11:01:32 a rock in your shoe

cornmuffin
pretty good.
its my friend's birthday, I'm crocheting her present

11:00:09 Winter

Snow
Yup that exactly, atleast 4 people I know have had it and survived it luckily

10:59:48 Winter

I need to get my finger out and start advertising this dude properly -WP Click-

10:59:40 Song

Meningitis?!
Stiff neck, highish fever?

10:57:46 Winter

Song
For me its meningitis

10:57:22 Winter

Acorn
I did not know that thank you :D

10:53:07 Song

What was the last flu the cool kids where sharing around at schools & campuses?

10:49:56 Acorn (She/Her)

Vax
I'm good, probably not here too much longer as I need to eat lol
How bout you?

10:49:18 a rock in your shoe

corn muffin
yello
howre you

10:48:52 Acorn (She/Her)

Yello Vax

10:48:39 Acorn (She/Her)

@[Eye of Eternity]
If no one else chooses one, Ralphie

10:48:35 Acorn (She/Her)

Winter
Ah, misc is close enough though :D

Oh also, if you click the apple or mushroom icon it takes you to barter as a little shortcut :D

10:47:11 a rock in your shoe

hello fellow goblins

Eye of Eternity

10:46:13 tern | they/he

i have to go eat so tag or pm me but somebody choose one more guy -Click- -Click-

10:45:03 Winter

Acorn
Nope your right pack expansion xD

10:42:07 Acorn (She/Her)

Winter
It feels like it could be either lol

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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