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Critique me!October 25, 2020 05:50 AM


Convivial

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Nice! your art is amazing, the only thing I can spot is the steadiness, personally I cant talk since my hands are constantly shaking
But you can tell your hands aren't steady
really the problem isn't with your art at all, just ya hand!
I really think your art is incredible for its style, perhaps you could tell me your prices?~
Critique me!October 25, 2020 05:52 AM


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Oh! Tis 'nother smol thing I spotted,
WIth the paws, create a layer under and draw a straight line from the bottom of the front paws to where the back ones will be.That way you dont have to worry about uneven paws!
Critique me!October 25, 2020 11:25 AM


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|Spookstess|.|Woof| said:
Nice! your art is amazing, the only thing I can spot is the steadiness, personally I cant talk since my hands are constantly shaking
But you can tell your hands aren't steady
really the problem isn't with your art at all, just ya hand!
I really think your art is incredible for its style, perhaps you could tell me your prices?~



|Spookstess|.|Woof| said:
Oh! Tis 'nother smol thing I spotted,
WIth the paws, create a layer under and draw a straight line from the bottom of the front paws to where the back ones will be.That way you dont have to worry about uneven paws!


Thank you! Yeah, I have to work on steadiness a lot, especially since I have to draw with a trackpad.
For prices, I usually just ask them to give me a price and I say yes or no.
Critique me!October 25, 2020 11:29 AM


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omg it's amazing!
Tips:
-shading?? at least for the necklace and bell
-you have claws out for only one paw? keep it more consistent
-you could add more detail for the last part of the tail, it seems kind of boring
Critique me!October 25, 2020 11:35 AM


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Thanks! The battle of me vs shading continues. Also, I didn't even notice I only had claws on one paw lol, thanks for pointing that out.

Boo-howlers said:
omg it's amazing!
Tips:
-shading?? at least for the necklace and bell
-you have claws out for only one paw? keep it more consistent
-you could add more detail for the last part of the tail, it seems kind of boring


Critique me!October 26, 2020 10:53 AM


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Flower Field said:
Thanks! The battle of me vs shading continues. Also, I didn't even notice I only had claws on one paw lol, thanks for pointing that out.

Boo-howlers said:
omg it's amazing!
Tips:
-shading?? at least for the necklace and bell
-you have claws out for only one paw? keep it more consistent
-you could add more detail for the last part of the tail, it seems kind of boring




Me shading everything on background possible only to be told later on that character doesn't have shadow XD
There is nothing to do, but nit-pick on this? I mean if you were aiming for realism it's way off track, but I doubt you did XD it's cute, very neat and appealing style in my opinion. So in case you were seeking positive confirmation that your art would be sold well on WP-you got it :D and if you want to somehow improve it, but don't know how you could search and look other people's art and see some cool stuff they do and implement it more or less in your art.
Critique me!October 26, 2020 02:15 PM


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I dont like the weird mustache
What you said give me criticism and I was being honest
Critique me!October 26, 2020 02:15 PM


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Alternate version of #1 -
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Critique me!October 27, 2020 07:45 PM


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#3-
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Edited at October 28, 2020 06:04 PM by Flower Field
Critique me!October 27, 2020 07:52 PM


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How are it's ears not falling off! The poor baby.
Why is it pink? Pink isn't a good color.
Is it supposed to be a pig?
What is that tail?????
The eyes look too big and the look like a bug's eyes and bugs are super gross.
you don't wanna know how hard it was for me to be so negative to such a great piece ;-;

Edited at October 27, 2020 07:55 PM by Votum

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