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off to eat dinnet and stuff
 Doodle Dragon
09:03:32 He/They pronouns
River is ging back to writing cursive :3
 Doodle Dragon
09:02:53 He/They pronouns
River told mom about River's tooth, River doesn't know if mom will do something about it, but at least mom knows now :p
 Serpents
08:59:24 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
what sounds more fitting for a name as most of my new ocs are tited with Subject then number for my sand elemental
I have dune others are like Waking Ghost
what fits
Soaring Sands
Roaring Desert
will take ideas
pm me

can someone pm me some animals and some hair styles please
im also looking to rp i need to work on my oc and want to use him pm me
 Doodle Dragon
08:54:52 He/They pronouns
Pink,
Aw, River hates when that happens ToT
 Pink kitty🐈
08:54:21 Kneecap stealer
Pink wants to make macaroni and cheese for dinner but people who have been over dirtied the Mac and cheese pot and never cleaned it
 The Dark Knights
08:54:17 Dark | She/Her
Could he get some paws please 🙏🏻
-WP Click-
 Doodle Dragon
08:54:05 He/They pronouns
Black Sorrow super pregnant :o

-Click-
 Doodle Dragon
08:52:47 He/They pronouns
Darkfire,
Bye bye

Pink,
Keeper of the lost cities :3 (or keepers of the lost city? River forgot)
 Pink kitty🐈
08:52:01 Kneecap stealer
Pink wonders what books river and dark are talking about
 Master Darkfire
08:51:49 Dark/fire/ice
ok by by :3
 Doodle Dragon
08:51:28 He/They pronouns
Darkfire,
Okay! Good night!
 Doodle Dragon
08:51:16 He/They pronouns
Darkfire,
Oh yeah River has read like the first graphic novel, River isn't good with human imagination, so River prefers the graphic novels instead of the chapter books :p
 Master Darkfire
08:51:09 Dark/fire/ice
dark need sleep dark need go
 Doodle Dragon
08:50:23 He/They pronouns
Pink,
River can wait a bit, River can force River's tooth out if needed :p

Darkfire,
Oh no :(
 Master Darkfire
08:49:28 Dark/fire/ice
doodle goose keeper
 Master Darkfire
08:48:52 Dark/fire/ice
dar's freinds not talk well about b-day party and now dark don't wanna go and big test and parents being shits and tam being preppy and being therian and shifting during test on Tuesday :( dark not having fun
 Pink kitty🐈
08:48:29 Kneecap stealer
Pink demands that river gets teeth checked out, river might have to have teeth taken out
 Pink kitty🐈
08:47:43 Kneecap stealer
Also pink thinks that dark IS a meep
 Doodle Dragon
08:47:42 He/They pronouns
Darkfire,
No sad and emo

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 Serpents
09:04:18 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
off to eat dinnet and stuff
 Doodle Dragon
09:03:32 He/They pronouns
River is ging back to writing cursive :3
 Doodle Dragon
09:02:53 He/They pronouns
River told mom about River's tooth, River doesn't know if mom will do something about it, but at least mom knows now :p
 Serpents
08:59:24 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
what sounds more fitting for a name as most of my new ocs are tited with Subject then number for my sand elemental
I have dune others are like Waking Ghost
what fits
Soaring Sands
Roaring Desert
will take ideas
pm me

can someone pm me some animals and some hair styles please
im also looking to rp i need to work on my oc and want to use him pm me
 Doodle Dragon
08:54:52 He/They pronouns
Pink,
Aw, River hates when that happens ToT
 Pink kitty🐈
08:54:21 Kneecap stealer
Pink wants to make macaroni and cheese for dinner but people who have been over dirtied the Mac and cheese pot and never cleaned it
 The Dark Knights
08:54:17 Dark | She/Her
Could he get some paws please 🙏🏻
-WP Click-
 Doodle Dragon
08:54:05 He/They pronouns
Black Sorrow super pregnant :o

-Click-
 Doodle Dragon
08:52:47 He/They pronouns
Darkfire,
Bye bye

Pink,
Keeper of the lost cities :3 (or keepers of the lost city? River forgot)
 Pink kitty🐈
08:52:01 Kneecap stealer
Pink wonders what books river and dark are talking about
 Master Darkfire
08:51:49 Dark/fire/ice
ok by by :3
 Doodle Dragon
08:51:28 He/They pronouns
Darkfire,
Okay! Good night!
 Doodle Dragon
08:51:16 He/They pronouns
Darkfire,
Oh yeah River has read like the first graphic novel, River isn't good with human imagination, so River prefers the graphic novels instead of the chapter books :p
 Master Darkfire
08:51:09 Dark/fire/ice
dark need sleep dark need go
 Doodle Dragon
08:50:23 He/They pronouns
Pink,
River can wait a bit, River can force River's tooth out if needed :p

Darkfire,
Oh no :(
 Master Darkfire
08:49:28 Dark/fire/ice
doodle goose keeper
 Master Darkfire
08:48:52 Dark/fire/ice
dar's freinds not talk well about b-day party and now dark don't wanna go and big test and parents being shits and tam being preppy and being therian and shifting during test on Tuesday :( dark not having fun
 Pink kitty🐈
08:48:29 Kneecap stealer
Pink demands that river gets teeth checked out, river might have to have teeth taken out
 Pink kitty🐈
08:47:43 Kneecap stealer
Also pink thinks that dark IS a meep
 Doodle Dragon
08:47:42 He/They pronouns
Darkfire,
No sad and emo




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Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:14 AM


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I'm bored and I love helping people, so in between commissions I'd love to help people correct their lines and give advice/critique.

I'm still a learner and I'm far from a professional artist so I don't know how this'll go.. :u

Just post down below with your art and such and I'll do my best to get back to you and offer corrections/advice/critique etc.. :)

I may/will be a little harsh on the critique. c:
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:33 AM


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just finished this for someone.

https://i.imgsafe.org/7e/7e1ca5f3f2.png
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:43 AM


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Robin XD -

overall I think it's a really cute piece! I can see your style coming along nicely. However, there are a few things I would change.

https://s22.postimg.cc/qau6rqjqp/1534588603291.png
Here I've given you a rough redline of how the kitty's body should look. Remember that an animal's face is just about symmetrical. Their eyes are both in the same place and their ears are the same size. Don't forget that floof c:

I feel like the front legs are a bit too spaced apart and the chest is a bit wide. I've drawn a guide on where the front leg should be. I know I sound nit-picky but animal paws have four toes. Try to remember that c:

As well as that the back legs are bending completely wrong. The hind left leg is twisting over as if it is broken :'D the guide I drew was rushed and I went a bit wonky on the back legs too, apologies. ^^'

I hope that helps. As I've said before it's an overall lovely piece. Keep practising! I can see your style forming! ^0^
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:49 AM


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Thankz <3 its a lot of help!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:44 AM


MossenMoose

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Oof.. I need help Xd
http://i66.tinypic.com/65skk9.jpg
Thanks for making this thread!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:45 AM


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Heck im posting a crappy drawing in :D
Please.. help me lol
https://s33.postimg.cc/uxp2a5o5b/7_F850_D40-9_CAE-4110-_A622-_CA773_A64035_D.jpg

Edited at August 18, 2018 11:47 AM by Epoch
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:52 AM


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Twilight Moon -

That's a cute little piece you've got there. c:

https://s33.postimg.cc/ojzz74ogv/1534607305694.png

Here's the basic redline. It's pretty messy :'D
I recommend not using massive circles to draw heads. It makes them bigger than they need to be. I've noticed you rely too much on circles in your drawings and tend to make the heads the main point of the drawing, which ends up with a tiny body.

I'd also recommend taking a look at some canine pictures for reference. Draw some lines over the joints and such and see how the body moves. Just make sure you're using stock. c:

Keep practising and you'll soon be brilliant!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 03:33 PM


MossenMoose

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Oof that's epic!
Let me give it a try :3
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 09:02 PM


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<3

Edited at August 19, 2018 08:42 AM by Robin XD
Free Line CorrectionAugust 19, 2018 08:41 AM


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lel i am going to be using this so much XD

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