Wolf Play : Critique please!

09:11:50 Dark/fire/ice

yeah auction. totally forgot hehe. i have mush in savings but it staying there. ima get more soon hehehe. i just boned the wolf because i felt like it. the wolf was sorta pretty

09:09:23 Cinn / Ace

Dark
tee hee
did you win an auction or something?

09:07:59 Dark/fire/ice

just ignoring the fact that i have -4 mush...

08:58:23 Cinn / Ace

DD
fuh
okay thanks

08:57:32 He/They pronouns

Cinn,
I dunno what color my music would be, but I think Moonstone (A4B8D6) and Gunmetal (353E43) could work? :p

08:55:25 Cinn / Ace

DD
speakijng of, what color would your music be
if you don't know, then what's your favorite color because i haven't been updated on that in a while

08:53:22 Cinn / Ace

DD
well im listening to olivia rodrigo in class

08:52:35 He/They pronouns

Chat sleepy

08:45:46 Cinn / Ace

Lurk
wait your wolves are so pretty too??
Especially the SV pup??

08:45:02 Cinn / Ace

Lurk
thank you ^^
I'm very much a "looks and stats" person, not so much rarity

08:44:36 He/They pronouns

Cinn,
I'd like to see you try

Lurking shadows

08:43:36

Cinamon Bloom u have sum pretty wolfies🙏

08:43:34 Cinn / Ace

DD
i will kool-aid man through the wall

08:43:13 He/They pronouns

Cinn,
It's your fault you decided to take pictures the day I was wearing that sweater :P

08:42:47 Cinn / Ace

DD
very your fault
your sWEATER
that's the main problem actually

08:42:09 He/They pronouns

Cinn,
haha (not my fault)

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09:11:50 Dark/fire/ice

yeah auction. totally forgot hehe. i have mush in savings but it staying there. ima get more soon hehehe. i just boned the wolf because i felt like it. the wolf was sorta pretty

09:09:23 Cinn / Ace

Dark
tee hee
did you win an auction or something?

09:07:59 Dark/fire/ice

just ignoring the fact that i have -4 mush...

08:58:23 Cinn / Ace

DD
fuh
okay thanks

08:57:32 He/They pronouns

Cinn,
I dunno what color my music would be, but I think Moonstone (A4B8D6) and Gunmetal (353E43) could work? :p

08:55:25 Cinn / Ace

DD
speakijng of, what color would your music be
if you don't know, then what's your favorite color because i haven't been updated on that in a while

08:53:22 Cinn / Ace

DD
well im listening to olivia rodrigo in class

08:52:35 He/They pronouns

Chat sleepy

08:45:46 Cinn / Ace

Lurk
wait your wolves are so pretty too??
Especially the SV pup??

08:45:02 Cinn / Ace

Lurk
thank you ^^
I'm very much a "looks and stats" person, not so much rarity

08:44:36 He/They pronouns

Cinn,
I'd like to see you try

Lurking shadows

08:43:36

Cinamon Bloom u have sum pretty wolfies🙏

08:43:34 Cinn / Ace

DD
i will kool-aid man through the wall

08:43:13 He/They pronouns

Cinn,
It's your fault you decided to take pictures the day I was wearing that sweater :P

08:42:47 Cinn / Ace

DD
very your fault
your sWEATER
that's the main problem actually

08:42:09 He/They pronouns

Cinn,
haha (not my fault)

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November 11, 2020 04:58 PM

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Exactly what the title says, critique away!

Edited at November 11, 2020 04:59 PM by Flower Field

November 11, 2020 05:46 PM

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They lookin' mighty thick 0///0

November 11, 2020 06:52 PM

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Lol they are thicc but gotta love that qwq

I am not a artist but for the one on the left, I think its face needs to be a bit longer like the one on the right because rats (and mice) tend to have longer faces and noses that stick out like buttons ^^

Maybe work on the toes a little if this is a comm?
Otherwise that is so cute and gorgeous! Love your style <3

Edited at November 11, 2020 06:53 PM by Crescents

November 11, 2020 06:56 PM