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10:41:38 a rock in your shoe

I'm coping with my shoulder by hopping into oceanriptide's comments and bullying him (siblingly love lol)

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19 pups wow

10:40:14 East

Hello!

10:37:53 Stalking chat

No.. I got another axanthic??
whatt

10:37:35 a rock in your shoe

I pain

10:37:15 Stalking chat

What is even going on today..

10:36:29 ezra, he/him

wild-
uh?? seems weird

10:34:56 Stalking chat

hold on,
my wolf Melania just gave birth TWICE?

Lurking shadows

10:33:29

I just need the pups to be hellhounds and then i can breed them to have hightalent hell hounds

Lurking shadows

10:31:04

Lurking shadows

10:30:46

I bred this cutie to a hell hounf, fingers crossed the boost passes on the pups

10:30:25 Dawn

Okay, thanks ^^

10:30:16 Stalking chat

Oh my gosh I love these pups..I might keep them all

Lurking shadows

10:29:49

theyre stillllllll so cute ahhhh

10:29:20 ezra, he/him

dawn-
i haven't bred twins myself so i can't confirm it says it in the report but if a wolf has a twin they will be linked to on the wolf's page

10:29:07 Stalking chat

Dawn,
yeah I got twins,
but they are only black coats :(
-WP Click-

-WP Click-

Lurking shadows

10:28:47

And it has high talents?!

10:28:35 ezra, he/him

wild-
ooh a silver dapple! lot of talents too

Lurking shadows

10:27:59

OHHH MY you people are so lucky lemme look at the cutiess

10:27:48 Dawn

Wild
Does the game tell you if they have twins or not? Cause sometimes the coat colors are similar but they aren't twins

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10:41:38 a rock in your shoe

I'm coping with my shoulder by hopping into oceanriptide's comments and bullying him (siblingly love lol)

10:41:29 Stalking chat

19 pups wow

10:40:14 East

Hello!

10:37:53 Stalking chat

No.. I got another axanthic??
whatt

10:37:35 a rock in your shoe

I pain

10:37:15 Stalking chat

What is even going on today..

10:36:29 ezra, he/him

wild-
uh?? seems weird

10:34:56 Stalking chat

hold on,
my wolf Melania just gave birth TWICE?

Lurking shadows

10:33:29

I just need the pups to be hellhounds and then i can breed them to have hightalent hell hounds

Lurking shadows

10:31:04

Lurking shadows

10:30:46

I bred this cutie to a hell hounf, fingers crossed the boost passes on the pups

10:30:25 Dawn

Okay, thanks ^^

10:30:16 Stalking chat

Oh my gosh I love these pups..I might keep them all

Lurking shadows

10:29:49

theyre stillllllll so cute ahhhh

10:29:20 ezra, he/him

dawn-
i haven't bred twins myself so i can't confirm it says it in the report but if a wolf has a twin they will be linked to on the wolf's page

10:29:07 Stalking chat

Dawn,
yeah I got twins,
but they are only black coats :(
-WP Click-

-WP Click-

Lurking shadows

10:28:47

And it has high talents?!

10:28:35 ezra, he/him

wild-
ooh a silver dapple! lot of talents too

Lurking shadows

10:27:59

OHHH MY you people are so lucky lemme look at the cutiess

10:27:48 Dawn

Wild
Does the game tell you if they have twins or not? Cause sometimes the coat colors are similar but they aren't twins

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animation/timing help/ criticism needed

June 8, 2023 10:41 AM

Darkseeker

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Working on a mini amv, i'm trying to get it done by (this) friday

Somethings off with the timing, can't tell what it is :/

i don't really like the first frame, so i might get rid of it/change it. It doesn't really hold the feeling of weight/locomotion

Edited at June 8, 2023 10:42 AM by Krampus

animation/timing help/ criticism needed

June 8, 2023 05:29 PM

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Hmm it looks like you might need more in-betweens, unless that's what you were planning to do.

There's also not a lot of anticipation in the first few frames of the action, which may be why it feels so stiff.

I'd reccomend looking at smear/smush frames and trying those out to get a bit more movement going!

Overall it's really good and good luck with the rest of the project!

Edited at June 8, 2023 05:29 PM by Beetle Tea

animation/timing help/ criticism needed

June 8, 2023 06:35 PM

Darkseeker

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Beetle Tea said:

Hmm it looks like you might need more in-betweens, unless that's what you were planning to do.

There's also not a lot of anticipation in the first few frames of the action, which may be why it feels so stiff.

I'd reccomend looking at smear/smush frames and trying those out to get a bit more movement going!

Overall it's really good and good luck with the rest of the project!

i just realised in the last action, i meant to put a flicking of the head/eyes, (as a secondary action) and completely forgot about it.

Not a lot of smear/smush frames here, i'll look into adding those.

thank you for your advice! ^^

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