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 Æthelwood
12:35:57 Moth | Yule
I have to grind to get the darn trophy
 CrestOfVerdance
12:35:52 
Radium,
You can do it! The only other finger doodle I've finished currently; -Click-
 SixBears
12:35:46 evebot
Looks good!!
 Sabbath
12:34:42 Rook
hehe I got the void animation
-WP Click-
 Radium
12:34:11 womp womp
Crest
Thats awesome! I also am procrastinating finishing my art PFT.
 Cypress Road
12:33:44 Axan hoarder
Eve
He's so emo. I love it
 RainbowRat
12:33:35 Gay lord (he/him)
COV-19
Lmfao!!
 CrestOfVerdance
12:33:34 
Radium,
Thank you! First time I've finished anything for myself in a long time. I finished another one too. And I am currently working on a third. Lol
 Æthelwood
12:33:34 Moth | Yule
Oh I so need it
 Radium
12:32:45 womp womp
Crest
It worked. That's beautiful! I love his coat.
 SixBears
12:32:22 evebot
Blood Rain: -WP Click-
 Cypress Road
12:32:14 Axan hoarder
Imma run and experiment and see which explore terrain gives me the most voodoo dolls during 1 full round of explore. Started with forest and got 8 dolls.
 CrestOfVerdance
12:32:05 
Rat,
Jokes on you, I can't count that high! /Silly
 Sabbath
12:32:03 Rook
oh no the gear and decor from this month's event are so good I'm gonna have to grind
 ChatNoir
12:31:45 Chat, Noir, Venti
I have two voodoo dolls
 CrestOfVerdance
12:31:42 
Here we go? -Click-
 RainbowRat
12:31:23 Gay lord (he/him)
COV-19
It was actually three times geez get it right/silly
 CrestOfVerdance
12:31:22 
Wait wrong link bad phone bad one moment
 CrestOfVerdance
12:31:12 
Radium,
Behold, finger doodle of my forest god. Cx -WP Click-
 Æthelwood
12:30:31 Moth | Yule
And I need to get the blood rain animation

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 Æthelwood
12:35:57 Moth | Yule
I have to grind to get the darn trophy
 CrestOfVerdance
12:35:52 
Radium,
You can do it! The only other finger doodle I've finished currently; -Click-
 SixBears
12:35:46 evebot
Looks good!!
 Sabbath
12:34:42 Rook
hehe I got the void animation
-WP Click-
 Radium
12:34:11 womp womp
Crest
Thats awesome! I also am procrastinating finishing my art PFT.
 Cypress Road
12:33:44 Axan hoarder
Eve
He's so emo. I love it
 RainbowRat
12:33:35 Gay lord (he/him)
COV-19
Lmfao!!
 CrestOfVerdance
12:33:34 
Radium,
Thank you! First time I've finished anything for myself in a long time. I finished another one too. And I am currently working on a third. Lol
 Æthelwood
12:33:34 Moth | Yule
Oh I so need it
 Radium
12:32:45 womp womp
Crest
It worked. That's beautiful! I love his coat.
 SixBears
12:32:22 evebot
Blood Rain: -WP Click-
 Cypress Road
12:32:14 Axan hoarder
Imma run and experiment and see which explore terrain gives me the most voodoo dolls during 1 full round of explore. Started with forest and got 8 dolls.
 CrestOfVerdance
12:32:05 
Rat,
Jokes on you, I can't count that high! /Silly
 Sabbath
12:32:03 Rook
oh no the gear and decor from this month's event are so good I'm gonna have to grind
 ChatNoir
12:31:45 Chat, Noir, Venti
I have two voodoo dolls
 CrestOfVerdance
12:31:42 
Here we go? -Click-
 RainbowRat
12:31:23 Gay lord (he/him)
COV-19
It was actually three times geez get it right/silly
 CrestOfVerdance
12:31:22 
Wait wrong link bad phone bad one moment
 CrestOfVerdance
12:31:12 
Radium,
Behold, finger doodle of my forest god. Cx -WP Click-
 Æthelwood
12:30:31 Moth | Yule
And I need to get the blood rain animation




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animation/timing help/ criticism neededJune 8, 2023 10:41 AM


Krampus

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Working on a mini amv, i'm trying to get it done by (this) friday
Somethings off with the timing, can't tell what it is :/
i don't really like the first frame, so i might get rid of it/change it. It doesn't really hold the feeling of weight/locomotion

Edited at June 8, 2023 10:42 AM by Krampus
animation/timing help/ criticism neededJune 8, 2023 05:29 PM


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Hmm it looks like you might need more in-betweens, unless that's what you were planning to do.

There's also not a lot of anticipation in the first few frames of the action, which may be why it feels so stiff.

I'd reccomend looking at smear/smush frames and trying those out to get a bit more movement going!

Overall it's really good and good luck with the rest of the project!


Edited at June 8, 2023 05:29 PM by Beetle Tea
animation/timing help/ criticism neededJune 8, 2023 06:35 PM


Krampus

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Beetle Tea said:

Hmm it looks like you might need more in-betweens, unless that's what you were planning to do.

There's also not a lot of anticipation in the first few frames of the action, which may be why it feels so stiff.

I'd reccomend looking at smear/smush frames and trying those out to get a bit more movement going!

Overall it's really good and good luck with the rest of the project!



i just realised in the last action, i meant to put a flicking of the head/eyes, (as a secondary action) and completely forgot about it.
Not a lot of smear/smush frames here, i'll look into adding those.
thank you for your advice! ^^

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