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Redlining is just me quickly sketching over your drawing to add some edits that I personally would add. No need to change anything, just my opinion! Someone redlined a drawing of mine and I personally liked it better without the edits, so don't feel pressure at all to accept!!
x Nights Touch x said:
I don't know what that is but Okay?? it all goes towards me being better at art
Dragonhorse said:
Do you want me to red line it really fast?
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Okay :D thanks, for helping though! |
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what do you think of this map i did for someone? took me a few hours to do |
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Lansnow said:
Like this?
I could definitely see the improvement in the head tilt! XD Also, the lines to make it look like feathers- that looks freaking awesome! I know it's not finished, but I think it looks pretty great! ^^ PS- no matter WHAT you post, I doubt I'll ever rip it apart- I'm a positively positive person :') |
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x Nights Touch x said:
So I did this so far and I wanna know your thoughts before it all goes wrong aha, I have a lot yet still to do though
I think this is a wonderful effort! ^^ There are most just anatomy mistakes, that's why it looks a bit wrong. Tips- look at references! Even if it's not an exact reference for your creature, there are lots of artist tutorials you could use to work on the legs especially- those are a challenge even for me! But to me, it most likely resembles those ancient depictions of Chinese dragons! ^^ |
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x Nights Touch x said:
what do you think of this map i did for someone? took me a few hours to do
I think it's really good! Only bit I need to comment on, is that the coloring goes out of line a bit! Since the green represents forestry, it shouldn't go over into the water. PS- I really like the texture! ^^ |
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Thanks :D
Elbowen said:
x Nights Touch x said:
what do you think of this map i did for someone? took me a few hours to do
I think it's really good! Only bit I need to comment on, is that the coloring goes out of line a bit! Since the green represents forestry, it shouldn't go over into the water. PS- I really like the texture! ^^
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My WIP!! Also Night, that looks a freaking amazing!! |
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Your watermark is a thing of beauty T-T |
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XD it's so crappy I know
Elbowen said:
Your watermark is a thing of beauty T-T
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