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kori said:
(for sun) i'd say the eyes are too small, and the lines are a bit wonky although i'm one to say lmao (for dog) well i certainly do
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nope, it would definitely sell! by 'rip apart' I mean give some very harsh criticism |
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@Sun Hmm, the eyes look a bit small and the head is facing more towards us but the snout is facing away from us. That's all I got though, nice work. |
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@Dog Nice! The only things I can really see is that the linework is a bit scratchy though that's just personal preference, it's a bit muddled in the middle, I can't really tell what's going on, and If they're supposed to be on the same ground level then the one on the right is a bit higher up. For the level problem, draw a line where your ground is, it's simple but works wonders lol. |
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Yea I will work better next time thanks ;)
Flower Field said:
@Dog Nice! The only things I can really see is that the linework is a bit scratchy though that's just personal preference, it's a bit muddled in the middle, I can't really tell what's going on, and If they're supposed to be on the same ground level then the one on the right is a bit higher up.
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SunFalcon said:
Hi everyone! ^^ I need some opinions on this commission I did, lol It's finished already but I'm not a fan of it, haha. I can't put my finger on what's off. The left eye (blue one) is also bothering me.
Heya Sunfalcon! The puppy looks adorable, and here's what I think looks a bit off: The eyes for one are too small! It's just as Kori advised, ^^ Secondly, it looks a bit odd because the black-side is one solid color. Remember that in art, we have shades of color to show the object's form. You have a hint of that in his black ear- and that's awesome! Maybe we could try putting some shading to show where his neck meets his head! |
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Dog wolves said:
I'm currently at auction off this pice of art any feed back would be nice ;) and what should the sb because I have SB at 500 mush and ab at 5 apples 
Firstly- that's adorable. I love the bunny! I'll try to give feedback without repeating what anyone else said! For starters- we have the scratchy line-art. We could try smoothing out those lines to get a clean look! If we don't, then it's going to be harder to color. Little tip- pretty please don't try to hide paws/eyes/hard-to-draw things behind objects! The rock in the middle feels a bit off because you have no other background decorations! If we're choosing to keep the rock, we could add a tree as well! ^^ |
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this place is kinda dead so heres a random fact yesterday I tried animating again. I made three seperate sketchy animations, and each were abandoned an hour in lmao |
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kori said:
this place is kinda dead so heres a random fact yesterday I tried animating again. I made three seperate sketchy animations, and each were abandoned an hour in lmao
Aww- don't give up hope just yet Kori! Push through something and I'm sure it'll reward you. No matter how annoying its gets XD ... Also, about the forum- it's not DEAD-DEAD but maybe just lingering near the afterlife? It's a good thing it's not overly popular- it would be hard to help everyone. I like that random people step in and post their art to get feedback. We might not get every artist on WP, but the few that post here get some feedback they need. XD |
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