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Imperial Sands said:

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Name:

Midnight

Age:

2 months

Gender:

Female

Herd: [Canyon Creek or None]

Canyon Creek

Rank:

Foal

Desired Rank:

Herd Mare

Appearance: [Detailed Description Required]

Midnight is a mixed colored foal. She weighs 250 pounds and is 14.2hh(14.5 Inches). She has a light black mane and a base coat of white. She has a brown mark on her flank and has light blue eyes. Midnight has tan hooves and brown ears. She has a white face along with most of her body being white. Her ears are about an inch or two long and she has pretty soild legs. She has a white nose and her neck where her mane is is brown until it meets her back.

Personality:

Midnight is very playful and carefree but she does love to play with her brother. She sticks close to Leo who is her brother because when it comes to other horse beside her mother and brother she is pretty reserved. She isn't very social but social enough to get through hard times. She is very caring and will defend her brother if she needs to. She is shy but social which isn't bad she just hides behind her brother when meeting new horses. She likes to gather flowers and she also like peace and quiet at times. She dislikes being inturrepted when with her brother and also loud nosies. Loud noises scare her and hurts her ears.

Crush:

Too young

Mate:

Too young

Foals:

Too young

Kin: [Family Relations]

Mom: Honey

Brother: Leo (There basically twins but not in apperance or personality just from birth.)

Affiliations: [Indepth Relations]

None

Other:

How much cookies could you make out of five cookie dough packs?

Name: Astra
Age: 4
Gender: Female
Herd: Canyon Creek
Rank: Herd Mare
Desired Rank: Lead Mare

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Appearance:

Her wild bred features are strongly accented. Standing at 16.2 hands she is bigger than some, and quite tall for a mare. Astra’s leg muscles stand out and she is as sure footed as any in the herd. She was born to the deputy mare five years ago, with her father being the previous lead stallion, both who passed away when she was just a filly. Her coat is distinctly recognizable as she is almost the spitting image of her late mother. Her tail is almost white, as is her face. Her bold brown eyes are brave and full of memories. Her hooves are as sure and sound as the mountains she climbs and the plains that she gallops across. Her legs were built for speed and stamina, through generations of horses before her.

Personality:

She is somewhat commanding and natural leader, she is fiercely loyal to the herd and treats others how she wishes to be treated. She demands respect in more ways than one but will respect each individual horse in their own unique ways. She is often stubborn with her opinions about the herd, but never puts the herd in a bad light. Although she is strong and tough, she does have a softer side. Foals are particularly her favourite but most of all she loves the yearlings. Their bubbling personalities always make her smile. She likes all the horses in the herd and although she does have some hesitation towards loners joining the herd, once she gets to know them and finds out their skills and personalities, she really connects with them. Although she is quite young, she has the experience of almost 5 years of herd life behind her and she was an intelligent horse from the beginning of her life and she had learnt from the ones before her what it meant to be in the herd. She hopes to lead the herd in the near future.

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Crush: Nikos [Is that allowed?]
Mate: None
Foals: None
Kin: Open
Affiliations: Open
Other: There are no horses with five hooves, only four.