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relinquit aetherium said:
My Insanity Cult is not a hell hole.
Its an Insane Hell Hole. |
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Guys! If mew like puns, mew might want to take a quack look at this club. :D |
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Thank you for trying to keep Pfeils brain- he wont be becomming a zombie (maybe) XD
I made the mistake of sending my dad my first two chapters.
He gets so scientific and says this is wrong and that and this and over there and its all WRONG.
He doesn't know how long it took me to figure out all this stuff and make sure its right XD |
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Aha, anytime pretty much the only way he will end up needing a transmitter is if he has a brain, which is kinda important, so ^^ . Aw, that's rough >.< It's a rough draft. You absolutely do not need to focus on anything minor like grammer, or anything. It's a concept, really ^^ Your writing is awesome. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise. . My mom is like that. She's kinda alarmingly good at writing and it scares me eheh, and always is pointing out my grammatical errors in my writing. My dad is pretty much really supportive of my writing, art, etc. He's getting his phd, and is an excellent writer, but has absolutely no knowledge of grammer. At. All. Once upon a few days back, I asked: hey, is this appositive in the right way, something like that. May have been about a balanced sentence + parallel structure. He was kinda just: wHaT? And I asked him if he knew what an adverb was. He said no. He was learning English when the rest of his class was learning English grammer, so, that's kinda part of the issue. |
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I did ask my dad to judge me though XD he didn't say anything about grammer.
before I shared the story with you guys I made a page on my laptop called Leviathan Facts and there I put gravity two or three times earths and he remembered that so he kept saying the people would need to eat a lot, be short and muscular and die easily XD
I changed it to have earths gravity because I double checked and some Super-earths do have earth gravity that changes just a little because I didn't want human dwarves XD
My moms the supportive one because she can't figure out the difference between quite and quiet, safe and save, life and live, and a few other things XD
but thats just because English isn't her first language either- |
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Ebbelwoi said:
I did ask my dad to judge me though XD he didn't say anything about grammer.
before I shared the story with you guys I made a page on my laptop called Leviathan Facts and there I put gravity two or three times earths and he remembered that so he kept saying the people would need to eat a lot, be short and muscular and die easily XD
I changed it to have earths gravity because I double checked and some Super-earths do have earth gravity that changes just a little because I didn't want human dwarves XD
My moms the supportive one because she can't figure out the difference between quite and quiet, safe and save, life and live, and a few other things XD
but thats just because English isn't her first language either-
Oh nuhno human muscle dwarves :0 . Aha, I feel that. My dad has good English, because he immigrated to the states when he was 13ish, and he has good grammer, but his knowledge of grammar just sucks. Noun, verb, adjective, and that's pretty much all he knows >.< |
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