Wolf Play : What is Left of Us

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10:15:12

2018-2021 was peek for roleplaying. Miss the details someone took in creating a storyline.

Couldn't keep me out of the roleplay section even if you paid me.

Boo

10:15:07 Chrissy

i'd be too lost. i scroll for at least two minutes while looking for a specific wolf already.

Rykio

10:14:49 An Attic.

Happy WP anniversary. :)

Saint

10:14:20

speaking of when people joined and stuff, todays my two years! (with this account at least lmao)

starmutt

10:13:55 marsh | they/it

Eci
i cant do that i have a meticulous order </3

starmutt

10:13:32 marsh | they/it

i skipped out on wolfplay during 2019~2021 so i missed out on some folks origin stories lol

Ecifircas

10:12:49

It's easy for me to reorganize my wolves because I'm evil and they're just pixels to me. Mwaha.

Saint

10:12:48

i'm trying my best at reading and stuffs then i see your name and my mind just short circuiting

Boo

10:11:38 Chrissy

i need my favourite wolves at the top of each folder. 😖

Kháos

10:10:54 Kaos || Khaos

I can read backwards, diagonally, whichever directions. I can also write in any way too. So seeing your name was just "huh, wait I need to look at this so I can pronounce it." and then my mind just read it backwards. XD

Ecifircas

10:10:51

Saint, lmao I respect it

Ecifircas

10:10:28

No.

Ellixter

10:10:15 Matt(hew)

When you use stagger dominance do you get to choose the order of the wolves

Saint

10:10:11

Efircas i'm just dyslexic lmao

Ecifircas

10:08:52

Khaos, you're one of the few. So many people wrinkle their nose at my username.

"Ecifircas? That's dreadful. Why that?" I can almost hear them saying.

Apothecary

10:08:40 Medicinally Autistic

Now I gotta wait here an hour to get food

Boo

10:08:39 Chrissy

i want to click it but i don't want to have to reorganize everything. 😭

Kháos

10:08:06 Kaos || Khaos

Then it was definitely Kodi. I remembered you as Kodiak, but you said Kodoggy and I got a bit confused / nervous to say Kodiak. 😅

I also remember that your current name is just Sacrifice backwards. I noticed that immediately when you changed your name.

Apothecary

10:07:40 Medicinally Autistic

@Boo

Well, now I know what I'm doing when the boost event comes out lol

Ecifircas

10:07:16

Boo, click it. lol

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What is Left of Us

February 25, 2021 02:21 PM

Dark Matter

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This is the edited first five pages of the first chapter, which was the max I could put into the competition- the rest is all in my blog-

but-

ohohooohoh-

the writing-

Chefs kiss on how badly it is aha-

What is Left of Us

February 25, 2021 02:29 PM

Crimson Skies

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It's really good! I would have put the dream in italics to stand out, but that's probably just me.

Explaining family and history can be very tedious (the reason why I skim-read Chronicles I and II in le Bible aha) but I think you handled it well. Sometimes explaining things like that in a story can make it more entertaining, I dunno.

Very good so far! :D

you'll just get better and better as you keep going, so then you can come back and refine things. Have you heard of the seven-step process for writing? :0 It's taught in Australia

What is Left of Us

February 25, 2021 02:34 PM

Dark Matter

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Nope-

Please-

Educate me in le Australian ways-

But that's my thing- I want Jaro to seem human and have family, and sure I could wait till Janick appears in the second chapter to explain the second thing- but it fits? I just don't know what is vital to the story, is interesting, and what's just boring...

What is Left of Us

February 25, 2021 02:44 PM

Crimson Skies

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seem human? Is she not human? xD

basically
Step 1: Plan for Success.

Step 2: Sizzling Starts. there are different kinds, yours in chapter 1 is a description of setting I think, but yeah. Start with something interesting

Step 3: Tightening Tension.

Step 4: Dynamic Dialogue. make it like an actual conversation to move the plot along?

Step 5: Show, Don't Tell.

Step 6: Ban the Boring.

Step 7: Exciting Endings. Also know your ending before you start writing

I'll PM ya a link that talks about it a little more but if you have any questions just ask me, I know it pretty well. I just need to start getting ready for school, so see you ^^

What is Left of Us

February 25, 2021 02:55 PM

Dark Matter

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