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Schatten Waechter said: Shadow Masters said: Silver Feather said: Shadow Masters said: I forgot to reply to this- Silver Feather said: Aww, Starry, it's okay, it happens to everyone ^^ Shadowy Shadow No, why?
I added the last sentence because he's an Albino-
Ahh, that makes sense. Also- I read through the whole first chapter. I know you said not to tell you if it was good or not, but I don't care. It was really good! TaKe My PrAiSe!
No its not good- Don't feed me lies- Shatter, help-
No.
I hate you all- Silver Feather said: Shadow Masters said: Silver Feather said: Shadow Masters said: I forgot to reply to this- Silver Feather said: Aww, Starry, it's okay, it happens to everyone ^^ Shadowy Shadow No, why?
I added the last sentence because he's an Albino-
Ahh, that makes sense. Also- I read through the whole first chapter. I know you said not to tell you if it was good or not, but I don't care. It was really good! TaKe My PrAiSe!
No its not good- Don't feed me lies- Shatter, help-
i'M nOt LyInG! It'S gOoD!
No it isn't- Stop speaking lies-
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Shatter if you help I'll never give you another compliment-
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Shadow Masters said: Schatten Waechter said: Shadow Masters said: Silver Feather said: Shadow Masters said: I forgot to reply to this- Silver Feather said: Aww, Starry, it's okay, it happens to everyone ^^ Shadowy Shadow No, why?
I added the last sentence because he's an Albino-
Ahh, that makes sense. Also- I read through the whole first chapter. I know you said not to tell you if it was good or not, but I don't care. It was really good! TaKe My PrAiSe!
No its not good- Don't feed me lies- Shatter, help-
No.
I hate you all- Thank you, Murder Backpack, you are amazing as well. ^^ Silver Feather said: Shadow Masters said: Silver Feather said: Shadow Masters said: I forgot to reply to this- Silver Feather said: Aww, Starry, it's okay, it happens to everyone ^^ Shadowy Shadow No, why?
I added the last sentence because he's an Albino-
Ahh, that makes sense. Also- I read through the whole first chapter. I know you said not to tell you if it was good or not, but I don't care. It was really good! TaKe My PrAiSe!
No its not good- Don't feed me lies- Shatter, help-
i'M nOt LyInG! It'S gOoD!
No it isn't- Stop speaking lies-
Accept my praise or I shall sing you more, you BEAUTIFUL Shadow, you! You're work is amazing! Edited at July 1, 2020 03:23 PM by Silver Feather
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I found another video that is us: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KAUB8rkaucsAlso- I was bored last night, so I wrote a few paragraphs about my other characters that I probably wont put in the book- do you guys want to read?
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Shadow Masters said: Shatter if you help I'll never give you another compliment-
Filler is right, but if they dare compliment you or me again I will throw all of you in a black hole-
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Silver Feather said: Shadow Masters said: Schatten Waechter said: Shadow Masters said: Silver Feather said: Shadow Masters said: I forgot to reply to this- Silver Feather said: Aww, Starry, it's okay, it happens to everyone ^^ Shadowy Shadow No, why?
I added the last sentence because he's an Albino-
Ahh, that makes sense. Also- I read through the whole first chapter. I know you said not to tell you if it was good or not, but I don't care. It was really good! TaKe My PrAiSe!
No its not good- Don't feed me lies- Shatter, help-
No.
I hate you all- Thank you, Murder Backpack, you are amazing as well. ^^ Silver Feather said: Shadow Masters said: Silver Feather said: Shadow Masters said: I forgot to reply to this- Silver Feather said: Aww, Starry, it's okay, it happens to everyone ^^ Shadowy Shadow No, why?
I added the last sentence because he's an Albino-
Ahh, that makes sense. Also- I read through the whole first chapter. I know you said not to tell you if it was good or not, but I don't care. It was really good! TaKe My PrAiSe!
No its not good- Don't feed me lies- Shatter, help-
i'M nOt LyInG! It'S gOoD!
No it isn't- Stop speaking lies-
Accept my praise or I shall sing you more, you BEAUTIFUL Shadow, you! You're work is amazing!
SHATTER SAVE ME FROM THE COMPLIMENTS- Schatten Waechter said: I found another video that is us: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KAUB8rkaucsAlso- I was bored last night, so I wrote a few paragraphs about my other characters that I probably wont put in the book- do you guys want to read?
Yes- I need something to distract me from the lies that Filver is sprouting-
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Murder Backpack Oh yes, that is a very accurate video Also, yes, yes I do want to read.
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Okay- This is Thyra (I might change the name) one of the main characters that won't exist till the end XD “I guess I should start from the beginning, shouldn’t I? In my kingdom, the more children you have the more powerful you are… obviously you don’t become the king if you have fifty sons and daughters, but the more sons the more workers you had that could marry women, spread the family genes, and the more reputation you got, the more daughters you had the more money you got when they were married off, and they would spread the family blood, but a daughter would only grow into a woman, so we don’t give much reputation… at least not good reputation. My father was a farmer, my mother a butchers daughter… neither came from very large families, and most of their siblings died of starvation or sickness, but both wanted to have a large family, to gain power, but to do that, you needed a son, as many sons as possible really. My parents had eight daughters before I was born, and finally, their ninth child, was a son. My parents thought that he was a sign and had me as soon as possible… except… well… I’m a girl. From the moment I was born my father hated me, cursed me. Even my sisters didn’t like me much, which I didn’t understand. My brother was being spoiled and treated like a prince while we were treated almost as worse as the swine my father sold. By the time I was nine, all my sisters were married off and all had daughters of their own, and were getting more. My father wanted to send my brother to a school, so he could bring more power to the family, but as a farmer he couldn’t afford to send my brother there. Had he married me to some stranger he would have had the funds, but my sisters had only had daughters and slowly my family was seen as cursed to only have women. So besides selling me in marriage, he sold me as a slave. I’ve been paraded through hundreds of cities, working for this master and that for a slice of bread and dirty water for six years. Had my father known how much I sold for when I grew into my skin, he’d have kept me longer for sure. I think my mother was the only one who missed me… She was wiping at her eyes when I was taken away, though the day had been dry and windy, so maybe she just got some sand in her eyes. I don’t really care now. I just hope my family learns about my gifts. I hope they learn and regret ever spurning me. Gods, I might even go back to my village and show them what I can do.”
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Shadow Masters said: Silver Feather said: Shadow Masters said: Schatten Waechter said: Shadow Masters said: Silver Feather said: Shadow Masters said: I forgot to reply to this- Silver Feather said: Aww, Starry, it's okay, it happens to everyone ^^ Shadowy Shadow No, why?
I added the last sentence because he's an Albino-
Ahh, that makes sense. Also- I read through the whole first chapter. I know you said not to tell you if it was good or not, but I don't care. It was really good! TaKe My PrAiSe!
No its not good- Don't feed me lies- Shatter, help-
No.
I hate you all- Thank you, Murder Backpack, you are amazing as well. ^^ Silver Feather said: Shadow Masters said: Silver Feather said: Shadow Masters said: I forgot to reply to this- Silver Feather said: Aww, Starry, it's okay, it happens to everyone ^^ Shadowy Shadow No, why?
I added the last sentence because he's an Albino-
Ahh, that makes sense. Also- I read through the whole first chapter. I know you said not to tell you if it was good or not, but I don't care. It was really good! TaKe My PrAiSe!
No its not good- Don't feed me lies- Shatter, help-
i'M nOt LyInG! It'S gOoD!
No it isn't- Stop speaking lies-
Accept my praise or I shall sing you more, you BEAUTIFUL Shadow, you! You're work is amazing!
SHATTER SAVE ME FROM THE COMPLIMENTS- Schatten Waechter said: I found another video that is us: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KAUB8rkaucsAlso- I was bored last night, so I wrote a few paragraphs about my other characters that I probably wont put in the book- do you guys want to read?
Yes- I need something to distract me from the lies that Filver is sprouting-
They are NOT lies! You are AMAZING! Also, Murder Backpack, I survived a black hole once, I shall do so again, shouting complements all the way, you BEAUTIFUL person!
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Schatten Waechter said: Okay- This is Thyra (I might change the name) one of the main characters that won't exist till the end XD “I guess I should start from the beginning, shouldn’t I? In my kingdom, the more children you have the more powerful you are… obviously you don’t become the king if you have fifty sons and daughters, but the more sons the more workers you had that could marry women, spread the family genes, and the more reputation you got, the more daughters you had the more money you got when they were married off, and they would spread the family blood, but a daughter would only grow into a woman, so we don’t give much reputation… at least not good reputation. My father was a farmer, my mother a butchers daughter… neither came from very large families, and most of their siblings died of starvation or sickness, but both wanted to have a large family, to gain power, but to do that, you needed a son, as many sons as possible really. My parents had eight daughters before I was born, and finally, their ninth child, was a son. My parents thought that he was a sign and had me as soon as possible… except… well… I’m a girl. From the moment I was born my father hated me, cursed me. Even my sisters didn’t like me much, which I didn’t understand. My brother was being spoiled and treated like a prince while we were treated almost as worse as the swine my father sold. By the time I was nine, all my sisters were married off and all had daughters of their own, and were getting more. My father wanted to send my brother to a school, so he could bring more power to the family, but as a farmer he couldn’t afford to send my brother there. Had he married me to some stranger he would have had the funds, but my sisters had only had daughters and slowly my family was seen as cursed to only have women. So besides selling me in marriage, he sold me as a slave. I’ve been paraded through hundreds of cities, working for this master and that for a slice of bread and dirty water for six years. Had my father known how much I sold for when I grew into my skin, he’d have kept me longer for sure. I think my mother was the only one who missed me… She was wiping at her eyes when I was taken away, though the day had been dry and windy, so maybe she just got some sand in her eyes. I don’t really care now. I just hope my family learns about my gifts. I hope they learn and regret ever spurning me. Gods, I might even go back to my village and show them what I can do.”
*Le gasp* it's so sad! I love it!
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