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Boundless said:
Doom that's wonderful writing teach me your ways lmao
Also- opinions-
just- the good and bad and what you would change/love the most except for grammar because I know its not great XD |
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Doom I got nothing heh. It was just all around consistent and engaging. The only point of critique I might make is that you need to watch repetition in vocabulary. |
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 More progress ^^ |
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Yeah- midnight writing isn't my best- but its usually when I get inspiration XD once I'm done with the chapter I'll re-read and fix that-
Also-
Frosch is beautiful! |
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Edited at June 13, 2020 03:52 AM by Schatten Waechter
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Heyo everyone! Good morning! (Or not morning, I don't know.) |
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I don't have mornings, I have certain hours where people shouldn't wake me up.
.... Thats called a morning, Shadow. |
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Silver What does hero look like? ;) I may or may not feel the urge to d r a w him |
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Grimm 70% wolf, and 30% German Shepard. He has a mix of black, tan, and brown, his fur had to be cut, and his tail cropped off as they were too long. He has amber eyes and is shorter than most others, but his long white fangs make up for it, making him look very threatening. He is slim and rather agile. His ears are naturally pricked, but also large (but not too large), making him look constantly alert and ready. His eyes hold a mysterious glimer, but show no emotion. His looks reveal nothing, perhaps making him seem somewhat dangerous and mysterious. Here ya go :) |
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