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Anddd I don't exist anymore, he found a bone. 🤣
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puppy just tried helping me go through the forums by scrolling up xD
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You can click this link, select the Apples tab and there will be options to purchase premium for apples as well as options to buy apples. -WP Click-
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How do I get a premium
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When you're premium, Menu < Pack < Pack Activities and there will be an option to go to your garden.
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How do I get my Greenhouse to work
 Kháos
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9999 mush for an apple is insanity
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Please Vote Dalmatian (fixed link)
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Ultra-
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It legit just 'ser you later alligator" at this point
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im glad to hear! not so great right now XD but im alright overall
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Ahhh the Alligators in swamp would NOT stop running away if I don't pursue them! I need them for a questtttt
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It's going well! How are you?
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Hey Vortex!
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hi Ultra!
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Dawn
Oh wait and new packs only start with 100 mush and some deer, nothing else, quite unlike now...
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 Kháos
08:08:41 Kaos || Kháos
Anddd I don't exist anymore, he found a bone. 🤣
 Kháos
08:05:22 Kaos || Kháos
puppy just tried helping me go through the forums by scrolling up xD
 Kháos
07:58:31 Kaos || Kháos
You can click this link, select the Apples tab and there will be options to purchase premium for apples as well as options to buy apples. -WP Click-
 Wound
07:57:52 
How do I get a premium
 Kháos
07:55:06 Kaos || Kháos
When you're premium, Menu < Pack < Pack Activities and there will be an option to go to your garden.
 Wound
07:54:31 
How do I get my Greenhouse to work
 Kháos
07:53:21 Kaos || Kháos
9999 mush for an apple is insanity
 De Vil
07:40:01 ⚫Cruella⚪
Please Vote Dalmatian (fixed link)
-WP Click-
 Xanthia
07:39:07 Vash | Xy
its almost 3 but i dont wanna sleep XD
 Xanthia
07:38:44 Vash | Xy
Vortex
It will as soon as i can find my painkillers but thanks! :)
 Kháos
07:37:44 Kaos || Kháos
Ultra-
D: I hope things get better for you soon!
 Professor Poopypants
07:37:18 PP
It legit just 'ser you later alligator" at this point
 Xanthia
07:36:15 Vash | Xy
im glad to hear! not so great right now XD but im alright overall
 Professor Poopypants
07:36:04 PP
Ahhh the Alligators in swamp would NOT stop running away if I don't pursue them! I need them for a questtttt
 Kháos
07:35:51 Kaos || Kháos
It's going well! How are you?
 Xanthia
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Hey Vortex!
Hows it going?
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07:34:40 Kaos || Kháos
hi Ultra!
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heyy chat
 Professor Poopypants
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Dawn
Oh wait and new packs only start with 100 mush and some deer, nothing else, quite unlike now...
 Black Dawn Den
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PP
That's crazy




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New to art, help is very appreciatedJuly 19, 2020 02:50 AM


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Hey everyone! I have been drawing for about a week now. This is my most recent work, I would love some tips and critiques to help me be better. Thank you!
https://i.postimg.cc/DZHjJrXD/D1-B5-ED70-9-C75-4296-8354-483-E13-BB8863.jpg

Edited at July 19, 2020 02:52 AM by White-tailed Deer
New to art, help is very appreciatedJuly 19, 2020 06:35 AM


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I'd be happy to critique!
- Generally, the lineart's not bad, but it still could be smoothened better. Try erasing the points that jut out, that'll make your piece a lot cleaner!
- I noticed the light gray from the pillow/beanbag kinda showing outside the lineart, just erase those parts!
- This one is heavily a nitpick on my part, since I've done this for so long that it's just a habit for me, but try filling in the fuzzy white bits on the cats (near the lineart) with a brush. Generally I don't the white bits around the lineart as I use a smoother brush, so you could try that? (For context, I use IbisPaint X and the Dip Pen is my bread and butter.)
- On the brown cat, the belly line curves too far down the legs. Usually I curve it up to the thigh area, but that's just me. It's head is also quite big and chonky, but maybe your cat's just a chonky fella.
- Try separating the colors on different layers, then alpha-locking the pillow color layer so you can add some darker gradients to it to texture it more like a pillow.
Hope this helps!
New to art, help is very appreciatedJuly 19, 2020 05:37 PM


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This piece is adorable, my only points where I'd change things are...
Anatomy: I would add more depth to grey tabby's leg that's sticking up, it looks like a hovering paw, you wanna add a little bit more detail around the actual "thigh" and hip area to help with seem like the leg is blending into the rest of the body. It's not the biggest deal, though.
The ginger cat's head is really large for its body, almost lynx-like, and the head's shape itself is a lot more canine than feline. Your head for the grey is excellent, however.
Furthermore, the ginger cat's feet, while the pose is absolutely adorable, are really tiny, I get what you're trying to do in making them appear bunched up, but I recommend doing that by defining the "hip" section of the cat, and the haunch more, and making the paws larger. So, essentially, accentuate how bunched up the joints are without sacrificing size.
Then with the ginger's paws, give them the same definition you did the grey's.
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What I really like about this piece was the cuteness, the pose is dynamic and precious, I love how the ginger seems almost "done" with the grey kitten, very cute and it's definitely not something I've seen commonly. The grey kitten also looks so unaffected comfortable, and it's precious. I also really love the color scheme you chose, it's extremely calming, and its softness definitely adds to the overall calming effect of the piece.
Well done!
New to art, help is very appreciatedJuly 19, 2020 05:39 PM


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This is so cute <3

If I were you, I'd try working on shading so everything doesn't seem so...flat. The ginger cat's back legs/paws are much smaller and thinner than the front legs/paws, so I'd fix that and even them out.

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