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08:25:37 Jack, Boo, Vapor

Nux

go ahead

08:24:50 You're just yellow

Jack

Care if I PM you?

08:21:18 Jack, Boo, Vapor

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retire? she keeps giving bad pups

08:20:46 Hazbinhotelobsessed!

hi everyone

08:17:05 You're just yellow

She has a long way to go, don't worry

08:16:47 You're just yellow

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Tossing her in here because as soon as she hits DG I'm selling her

08:14:18 Jack, Boo, Vapor

Brimstone has leveled up their battle skills!

nice his BE training is going quite well

Forest Dwelling

08:11:34 I am on Wolflocke ok

Votes?
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08:04:02 Axol

Saint
I went to my sisters therapy apoinment and my sister looks at the therpist and said "my whole damn torso is built like a damn tringle." the therapist lost it.

08:00:39 You're just yellow

BJake

You're forced to get up early too :')

Nothing is more petty than being forced to take family pictures of the entire family (excluding you) and then sending a selfie and saying "A pic of the camera man since she didn't get to take pics with the family"

Very passive aggressive. I felt very bad after I sent it but I could exactly unsend it :|

07:59:10

when wolf in labor how long till she gets pups

07:58:31 You're just yellow

I bonked my head on my professor's desk this morning and knocked his apple off and it like, busted open and oozed everywhere and he thank me because he planned on eating it with his lunch so I'm like... and unconventional hero.

07:57:17 Don't call me BJ.

My parents woke me at 6 am(I went to bed at 2:30), call me petty but I just caught the most irritating fly mid flight and released it in my parents room. UvU

07:56:44 and your just blue

what

07:56:33 Axol

Saint
wanna know something funny?

07:56:11 Axol

sup

07:55:25 and your just blue

hi

07:54:49 Axol

Saint
yea?

07:54:32 You're just yellow

300 mush in explore from 70 moves, I think I did well.

07:53:37 and your just blue

axol

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April 16, 2018 09:07 PM

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Here's the image

https://s14.postimg.cc/4h7dmgk29/Random_Galaxy.png

For some reason, something's been really bothering me about this picture and I can't seem to figure out what.

All critiques are appreciated, or just tell me what you wish was changed

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 09:12 PM

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Maybe more stars? We don't really see them

Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

April 16, 2018 09:37 PM

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DarkCloudClan said:
Maybe more stars? We don't really see them
Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

Alright, lemme spam the stars and update the picture XD

Edit: UPDATED

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 11:31 PM

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Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

April 16, 2018 11:53 PM

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a m b e r said:
Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

XD Thanks, let me update it again

April 16, 2018 11:55 PM

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I really like it! Possibly a couple other colors blended? Lighter blues and brighter pinks maybe. Just a subtle change.

April 17, 2018 12:48 AM

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Maybe if you make it a bit lighter?

April 17, 2018 01:48 AM

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I love It! I don't know much about art, but the purple cloud/nebula looks a little on the denser side.

Still, it's really beautiful! :D

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