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i did draw The cool cat a while ago . i just cant post him here for obvious reasons.... ugh....
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i'll be gloomy until they glue me in the arms of she who loves me Edited at February 21, 2024 07:57 AM by los campesinos!
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i could never criticize your artwork 😭 absolutely gorgeous rendering, beautiful color palette and THE POSE? so cute!
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Beautiful. Just beautiful.
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distant-lands said: i could never criticize your artwork 😭 absolutely gorgeous rendering, beautiful color palette and THE POSE? so cute!
thank you gang
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Wow very beautiful art <3
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Looks great! But the lineart on the paw and tail of the brown cat sticks out like a sore thumb. If you've got lineart that matches the colours of the cats all the way through but not in random parts then it does look odd.
I can also see that you've tried to add some texture to the bottom cat, but it's best to remember how fur flows and doesn't really sprout in random places (unless this is how your character is). I would remove that, have a look at where the fur would catch highlights (like along an arm, the points that are the most raised) and apply more shadowey-fur strokes in places like under the armpit. I can see you've done this to an extent but it's important to keep consistency, although fur can go in crazy ways it generally won't look like that. This could also help you break up the big block of shadow on that bottom cat's back. I'm not saying you should draw every piece of hair individually but showing a little bit of texture here and there like you have helps to break up any patches that look more cel-shaded or flat, this will help with depth.
other than that though I don't have much to say. The lighting is really beautiful, the pose is adorable and well executed. Good job :)
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that's rather helpful, thank you! i will try to bare your advice in mind :) just to y'know say the shading you said on her back is a marking! but aside from that, yeah, thank you 😸
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