Wolf Play : opinions + tips

04:24:07 The Howling Shrek

what was Eves this year april fools day like?

04:23:42 The Howling Shrek

boop a very random and quick hello, to anyone who remembers me. im still MIA but hello

starrii-featherz

04:19:17 starrii, Lucida, Hex

Waiting for Margo to go into labor so I can see if there's any decent pups to keep or not, I need to know since I'm drawing her and Lune together right now

-WP Click-

Winterfell

03:34:29 Winter

My raffle isn't doing well this time round and I wonder why I added better stuff >.>

Smilecat

03:24:52 Anthony // He/they

just finished reading a piece of fiction so good it made me cry and i cant talk about it irl because it was fanfic
anyway, good night chatters

02:40:04 Axan hoarder

Also thank you. She loved them too.

02:39:36 Axan hoarder

Oh. Have fun at church

02:38:33 Vash | Xy

Cy
Church
And I absolutely love those :00 they're so cute I love em
I'll definitely dm you about art sometime<33

02:35:04 Axan hoarder

Xyxy
Whats starting?

02:34:40 Axan hoarder

Xyxy
I dont remember if I showed you or not but these are 2 tattoo designs I made for one of my coworkers cause she asked me to design her a tattoo. She said she is gonna get both
-Click-
-Click-

02:34:29 Vash | Xy

I gotta go it's starting hope to catch you sometime again xx

02:34:14 Vash | Xy

Hey
Cycy<33 yes I do🤭

02:32:23 Axan hoarder

Xyxy
Hey. You know i love doing art.

02:25:41 Vash | Xy

I should get more art >:)

02:20:01 Vash | Xy

Heyy

02:05:17 Axan hoarder

Omgim so happy. They were super nice and understanding. I got my axanthic back. Im so happy 😊

Collar

02:02:35 Altar 🦌

I see my partner in 48 minutes. So freaking hyped ohh my god

The Rat Lord

01:58:38 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

I’m back (sorry I kinda sidetracked lol that what you get with an ADHD brain)

01:53:36 Axan hoarder

Yall im praying this pack will be nice and let me have my axanthic back. I boarded with another pack for a couple days and they put him up for 5 mush for me to pick up and did it when I was offline. Im o sad. 😭

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04:30:00 Carpal Tunnel

It was squirrels this year.

04:24:07 The Howling Shrek

what was Eves this year april fools day like?

04:23:42 The Howling Shrek

boop a very random and quick hello, to anyone who remembers me. im still MIA but hello

starrii-featherz

04:19:17 starrii, Lucida, Hex

Waiting for Margo to go into labor so I can see if there's any decent pups to keep or not, I need to know since I'm drawing her and Lune together right now

-WP Click-

Winterfell

03:34:29 Winter

My raffle isn't doing well this time round and I wonder why I added better stuff >.>

Smilecat

03:24:52 Anthony // He/they

just finished reading a piece of fiction so good it made me cry and i cant talk about it irl because it was fanfic
anyway, good night chatters

02:40:04 Axan hoarder

Also thank you. She loved them too.

02:39:36 Axan hoarder

Oh. Have fun at church

02:38:33 Vash | Xy

Cy
Church
And I absolutely love those :00 they're so cute I love em
I'll definitely dm you about art sometime<33

02:35:04 Axan hoarder

Xyxy
Whats starting?

02:34:40 Axan hoarder

Xyxy
I dont remember if I showed you or not but these are 2 tattoo designs I made for one of my coworkers cause she asked me to design her a tattoo. She said she is gonna get both
-Click-
-Click-

02:34:29 Vash | Xy

I gotta go it's starting hope to catch you sometime again xx

02:34:14 Vash | Xy

Hey
Cycy<33 yes I do🤭

02:32:23 Axan hoarder

Xyxy
Hey. You know i love doing art.

02:25:41 Vash | Xy

I should get more art >:)

02:20:01 Vash | Xy

Heyy

02:05:17 Axan hoarder

Omgim so happy. They were super nice and understanding. I got my axanthic back. Im so happy 😊

Collar

02:02:35 Altar 🦌

I see my partner in 48 minutes. So freaking hyped ohh my god

The Rat Lord

01:58:38 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

I’m back (sorry I kinda sidetracked lol that what you get with an ADHD brain)

01:53:36 Axan hoarder

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September 21, 2019 09:12 PM

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<div align="center">hi -

<div align="center">i am looking for critiques on my art so i can develop as an artist.

<div align="center">i want to improve my art, so please give honest feedback.<div align="center">
<div align="center">i would appreciate it.<div align="center">thank you! <3<div align="center">
<div align="center">gallery - https://wolfplaygame.com/forums.php?f=5&t=40219<div align="center">
<div align="center">i use my phone for art because it doesn't hate me like my computer.<div align="center">
<div align="center">i might start doing things on my computer but that is unlikely anytime soon.<div align="center">
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<div align="center">tips -<div align="center">-make foreheads less sharp.<div align="center">-neck length and anatomy.<div align="center">-eyes.<div align="center">
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Edited at September 21, 2019 09:31 PM by After Death

September 21, 2019 09:24 PM

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A bit spaghetti like legs but its adorable, honestly I like how it looks but the first picture has a long neck,

September 21, 2019 09:26 PM

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Your style is adorable and has a lot of potential to get even better :o

My main thoughts are to work on eyes. Unfortunately i'm horrid at art and need to work on them myself so i cannot give tips on how to do so. Also maybe make the foreheads less sharp?

September 21, 2019 09:27 PM

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<div style="text-align: center;">crows -

<div style="text-align: center;">the spaghetti legs were on purpose ;)

<div style="text-align: center;">my regular legs don't look like that, but i should've said that in my post. i will try to make sure the neck isn't as long in future art with that pose.<div style="text-align: center;">
<div style="text-align: center;">thanks for the criticism! c:<div style="text-align: center;">

September 21, 2019 09:30 PM

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<div style="text-align: center;">king-

<div style="text-align: center;">thank you, that means a lot!

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<div style="text-align: center;">next time i will make the foreheads less shard and a but more sloped. c:<div style="text-align: center;">i will look at wolf images to improve on my eyes.<div style="text-align: center;">
<div style="text-align: center;">thanks for the criticism!

September 22, 2019 09:13 PM

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<div style="text-align: center;">Perhaps you could work on your proportion and anatomy more? On your full body ref sheet I noticed that the head is a little bit bigger than it should be, typically 2 heads should fit on where the body would be, if you know what I mean ^^.

<div style="text-align: center;">I've seen some of your older works where you didn't draw spaghetti legs, and the anatomy of the back legs could be improved :). <div style="text-align: center;">
<div style="text-align: center;">Something I think you should also do is go into more complex shading, instead of just plain old cell shading. Or you could do complex cell shading :000

September 22, 2019 09:13 PM

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<div align="center">Double post

Edited at September 22, 2019 09:17 PM by Eclipse~

September 22, 2019 09:14 PM

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<div align="center">Triple post

Edited at September 22, 2019 09:16 PM by Eclipse~

September 22, 2019 11:43 PM