Wolf Play : Critique

10:45:26 NRC/Night/Raven

Laura
Pretty pups

10:44:53 Rat/Laura

Same girl also gave me this!
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10:43:43 NRC/Night/Raven

Yay, my parents just planned a trip for July. I can't wait.

Avalon

10:43:37 Ava/Leon | she/her

Beautiful!

10:43:13 Rat/Laura

I think I'llkeep her

10:42:31 Rat/Laura

Ahhhhh omg !!
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Nero

10:25:37 Winterfell

Ever
Yeah shit sucks man I think I'm going to go back to my home country

10:20:23 Worm/Ever

Winter
I mean hes supposed to support ya too, ain't he ? You trusted him enough to let him know about it and then he just goes a d uses it against you in an argument?! Really messed up

Nero

10:17:55 Winterfell

Con
Literally I have a child with him aswell so why do that it's just messed up and extremely hurtful , I hope your doing okay love <3

Nero

10:17:13 Winterfell

Ever
My mum is furious because I'm getting help for it but it would be better if he supported me you know

10:16:57 You've been Conned

Nero
I feel that hun i know that hurts I don't know your full situation but im going through something similar right now and it really does feel like betrayal because that's someone you trust to know those things

Nero

10:16:44 Winterfell

I completely forgot I have an alliance lmao

10:16:23 Worm/Ever

Winter
I mean it isn't even your fault. Thats just fucked up.

Nero

10:15:42 Winterfell

Ever
Literally I burst out crying and said to him that's it's so unfair considering I cannot control it at the moment

10:15:25 You've been Conned

Dark moon
There's this one
-WP Click-

Dark Moon Wolf Pack

10:13:43

Does anyone know of an alliance with a minimum dom of 69 or less that I can join? I have a quest that requires me to win 5 battles.

10:01:55 Worm/Ever

Winter
Thats actually fucked up what the hell

Nero

10:01:26 Winterfell

My boyfriend just used my mental health issues against me in an argument and I've never felt so betrayed:D

Hellions

09:35:11 Barley (she/her)

Nevermind I can't </3

09:34:51 You've been Conned

Skipper
That's actually so funny I never noticed that

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10:45:26 NRC/Night/Raven

Laura
Pretty pups

10:44:53 Rat/Laura

Same girl also gave me this!
-WP Click-

10:43:43 NRC/Night/Raven

Yay, my parents just planned a trip for July. I can't wait.

Avalon

10:43:37 Ava/Leon | she/her

Beautiful!

10:43:13 Rat/Laura

I think I'llkeep her

10:42:31 Rat/Laura

Ahhhhh omg !!
-WP Click-

Nero

10:25:37 Winterfell

Ever
Yeah shit sucks man I think I'm going to go back to my home country

10:20:23 Worm/Ever

Winter
I mean hes supposed to support ya too, ain't he ? You trusted him enough to let him know about it and then he just goes a d uses it against you in an argument?! Really messed up

Nero

10:17:55 Winterfell

Con
Literally I have a child with him aswell so why do that it's just messed up and extremely hurtful , I hope your doing okay love <3

Nero

10:17:13 Winterfell

Ever
My mum is furious because I'm getting help for it but it would be better if he supported me you know

10:16:57 You've been Conned

Nero

10:16:44 Winterfell

I completely forgot I have an alliance lmao

10:16:23 Worm/Ever

Winter
I mean it isn't even your fault. Thats just fucked up.

Nero

10:15:42 Winterfell

Ever
Literally I burst out crying and said to him that's it's so unfair considering I cannot control it at the moment

10:15:25 You've been Conned

Dark moon
There's this one
-WP Click-

Dark Moon Wolf Pack

10:13:43

Does anyone know of an alliance with a minimum dom of 69 or less that I can join? I have a quest that requires me to win 5 battles.

10:01:55 Worm/Ever

Winter
Thats actually fucked up what the hell

Nero

10:01:26 Winterfell

My boyfriend just used my mental health issues against me in an argument and I've never felt so betrayed:D

Hellions

09:35:11 Barley (she/her)

Nevermind I can't </3

09:34:51 You've been Conned

Skipper
That's actually so funny I never noticed that

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Forums > Artwork > Art Help

September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM