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 Amygdala
07:49:00 Amy/Anpmygdala
Finally...only took me 3200 moves to find 60 rabbits
 TheFlyingKitten
07:48:30 Petri Dish/Sorceress
@ky

I got chat speechless. We all know the truth. XD
 kycantina
07:45:40 ky but it's spooky
Petri please it's 2am XD
 Amygdala
07:45:35 Amy/Anpmygdala
Ky
Well my birthday is coming up...i am sure i can convince my family to get me one lmao
 starmutt
07:45:00 marsh | they/it
80 moves into swamp i have spotted Llorona
maybe she IS a swamp encounter lol
 kycantina
07:44:46 ky but it's spooky
Amy, I'm endlessly amused by your deciding to get a laptop for FMC lol
 TheFlyingKitten
07:44:44 Petri Dish/Sorceress
Is the need to have your toes covered constantly at night just human instinct? And if so, why? We afraid of giving monsters the dogs for free?
 Amygdala
07:42:40 Amy/Anpmygdala
Ky
Good luck...just you wait for next FMC...i am getting myself the laptop...then i shal be unstoppable >:)
 kycantina
07:41:32 ky but it's spooky
Amy, oof. I'm still at work but the bar just closed so hopefully I'm outta here in the next 45 minutes, speed exploring so I don't have to finish the moves on my phone
 Everlasting Torment
07:40:12 Anubis, Samael
Damn nice

-WP Click-
 Amygdala
07:39:45 Amy/Anpmygdala
Ky
It's almost 3am...i should be asleap lol...but i want to get to 18.000 moves. The only problem is i keep getting 6 grizzly bears together🤣
 The Amethyst
07:38:49 Dart
Necro

Acid Rain?
 kycantina
07:38:06 ky but it's spooky
Amy, I thought you were asleep lol hi
 Amygdala
07:37:24 Amy/Anpmygdala
Ky
I have 18.300 moves left 🥲
 Necronomicon
07:37:17 Necro (He Him)
-WP Click-

name ideas?
 The Amethyst
07:36:39 Dart
Et

A cockapoo he recently turned 1!
 Eternity
07:36:16 ET
Amethyst
Yeah haha, that is really odd. I do wonder what happened with that.
I'm glad to hear it's alright otherwise, and art is always fun. What type of dog is your puppy?
 kycantina
07:36:13 ky but it's spooky
1000 moves left ;')
 Leia
07:35:46 Leia, Evie
Wind - Thank you for that information! I didn't know that. Sadly Gwyn always flees before I defeat them, or they defeat my wolves so it’s a struggle with that one. :‘)
 Everlasting Torment
07:35:08 Anubis, Samael
I need the birds in swamp XD

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CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 05:13 PM


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So I'm looking for critique of my art
When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for
Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]
https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2
Hide and Seek [HEE contest]
http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 06:54 PM


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new artz added
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 06:59 PM


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Um they both look fine to me xD
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 07:32 PM


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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 03:31 AM


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Thank you :D
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 05:07 AM


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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.
Round out the ears a little?
The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!
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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 09:15 AM


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Thanks every for the critique
Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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