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 Apothecary
01:34:37 Medicinally Autistic
event currency carries over to the next year the event runs, so brainsyou make this year will carry to next year.
 Ishouldbeinschool
01:33:18 Sileas, he/they
can anyone DM me names for my wolves? I cannot think of any :(
 Bobcat
01:32:44 (She) Cat {no bob}
Your wolves played: Oreo of pack WolffHowlinton wrestles with Pup 55 in a good natured test of strength.

Prepping for the FMC? Good wolves.
 Evergreen Shadows
01:28:59 
Thank you Ky- and thank you for that clarification starmutt! That's what I was wondering mainly :D
 starmutt
01:28:09 marsh | they/it
event currency carries over
when a wolf with decor dies, the wolf loses the decor and it returns to your inventory.
 kycantina
01:27:06 ky but it's spooky
Evergreen, yes, and fairly sure yes
Charlie, also yes
 Charlie Bone
01:26:13 
can i give cp to pups?
 Evergreen Shadows
01:26:13 
A couple of questions: Does event currency carry over? (As in, does it stay there if I don't spend any this time?) And if a wolf that has decor on dies, do you lose that decor?
 BloodWeb
01:12:17 Blood/Nicole
Big foot took almost my whole team. Then fled wtf
 Serpents
01:07:30 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
anyone have power name ideas for magic?/dark arts pm me
 Wolves of Moon
01:06:33 caol (kyle)
@katy
that's so cute!!!
 Tiny Village
01:04:53 Tiny
Good afternoon
 Hallow's Eve
01:00:01 Hallow, Eve
IÂ’m so tired lol
 distant-screams
12:54:35 katy | beetle
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ee got the lines done :p
 Ámor
12:53:20 On haitus
I may or may not have went to my lunch an hour and half late oops-
 Ishouldbeinschool
12:47:50 Sileas, he/they
"You have gained brains!"
wow yay yippee
 Cherokee Pride
12:42:02 Cher
Hello!
Anybody up for an rp while I not pay attention in class? XD
Shoot me a pm! :)
(I have a couple of plots I'm tinkering on I'd like some outside opinions on!)
 Ishouldbeinschool
12:41:14 Sileas, he/they
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can he get some points? I want to create wolf-god... X3
 Apothecary
12:37:15 Medicinally Autistic
ahhh

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please vote.
 Apothecary
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Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:14 AM


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I'm bored and I love helping people, so in between commissions I'd love to help people correct their lines and give advice/critique.

I'm still a learner and I'm far from a professional artist so I don't know how this'll go.. :u

Just post down below with your art and such and I'll do my best to get back to you and offer corrections/advice/critique etc.. :)

I may/will be a little harsh on the critique. c:
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:33 AM


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just finished this for someone.

https://i.imgsafe.org/7e/7e1ca5f3f2.png
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:43 AM


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Robin XD -

overall I think it's a really cute piece! I can see your style coming along nicely. However, there are a few things I would change.

https://s22.postimg.cc/qau6rqjqp/1534588603291.png
Here I've given you a rough redline of how the kitty's body should look. Remember that an animal's face is just about symmetrical. Their eyes are both in the same place and their ears are the same size. Don't forget that floof c:

I feel like the front legs are a bit too spaced apart and the chest is a bit wide. I've drawn a guide on where the front leg should be. I know I sound nit-picky but animal paws have four toes. Try to remember that c:

As well as that the back legs are bending completely wrong. The hind left leg is twisting over as if it is broken :'D the guide I drew was rushed and I went a bit wonky on the back legs too, apologies. ^^'

I hope that helps. As I've said before it's an overall lovely piece. Keep practising! I can see your style forming! ^0^
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:49 AM


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Thankz <3 its a lot of help!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:44 AM


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Oof.. I need help Xd
http://i66.tinypic.com/65skk9.jpg
Thanks for making this thread!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:45 AM


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Heck im posting a crappy drawing in :D
Please.. help me lol
https://s33.postimg.cc/uxp2a5o5b/7_F850_D40-9_CAE-4110-_A622-_CA773_A64035_D.jpg

Edited at August 18, 2018 11:47 AM by Epoch
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:52 AM


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Twilight Moon -

That's a cute little piece you've got there. c:

https://s33.postimg.cc/ojzz74ogv/1534607305694.png

Here's the basic redline. It's pretty messy :'D
I recommend not using massive circles to draw heads. It makes them bigger than they need to be. I've noticed you rely too much on circles in your drawings and tend to make the heads the main point of the drawing, which ends up with a tiny body.

I'd also recommend taking a look at some canine pictures for reference. Draw some lines over the joints and such and see how the body moves. Just make sure you're using stock. c:

Keep practising and you'll soon be brilliant!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 03:33 PM


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Oof that's epic!
Let me give it a try :3
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 09:02 PM


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<3

Edited at August 19, 2018 08:42 AM by Robin XD
Free Line CorrectionAugust 19, 2018 08:41 AM


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lel i am going to be using this so much XD

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