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 Apothecary
01:34:37 Medicinally Autistic
event currency carries over to the next year the event runs, so brainsyou make this year will carry to next year.
 Ishouldbeinschool
01:33:18 Sileas, he/they
can anyone DM me names for my wolves? I cannot think of any :(
 Bobcat
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Your wolves played: Oreo of pack WolffHowlinton wrestles with Pup 55 in a good natured test of strength.

Prepping for the FMC? Good wolves.
 Evergreen Shadows
01:28:59 
Thank you Ky- and thank you for that clarification starmutt! That's what I was wondering mainly :D
 starmutt
01:28:09 marsh | they/it
event currency carries over
when a wolf with decor dies, the wolf loses the decor and it returns to your inventory.
 kycantina
01:27:06 ky but it's spooky
Evergreen, yes, and fairly sure yes
Charlie, also yes
 Charlie Bone
01:26:13 
can i give cp to pups?
 Evergreen Shadows
01:26:13 
A couple of questions: Does event currency carry over? (As in, does it stay there if I don't spend any this time?) And if a wolf that has decor on dies, do you lose that decor?
 BloodWeb
01:12:17 Blood/Nicole
Big foot took almost my whole team. Then fled wtf
 Serpents
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anyone have power name ideas for magic?/dark arts pm me
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@katy
that's so cute!!!
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 Hallow's Eve
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IÂ’m so tired lol
 distant-screams
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ee got the lines done :p
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I may or may not have went to my lunch an hour and half late oops-
 Ishouldbeinschool
12:47:50 Sileas, he/they
"You have gained brains!"
wow yay yippee
 Cherokee Pride
12:42:02 Cher
Hello!
Anybody up for an rp while I not pay attention in class? XD
Shoot me a pm! :)
(I have a couple of plots I'm tinkering on I'd like some outside opinions on!)
 Ishouldbeinschool
12:41:14 Sileas, he/they
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can he get some points? I want to create wolf-god... X3
 Apothecary
12:37:15 Medicinally Autistic
ahhh

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please vote.
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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

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Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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