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 Apothecary
02:26:22 Medicinally Autistic
@Boo

Just keep saving just keep saving just keep saving saving saving, what do you do you save save save.
 Voxtexy
02:26:16 Vox, Corey
It does take me straight to round 5, but there's nothing that says I can use a token
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 Magnus Bane
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 distant-screams
02:25:56 katy | beetle
Rogue,
thanks ^^
 Everlasting Torment
02:25:40 Anubis, Samael
I've got 5 k saved 11 tokens why I keep saving and extra money as well Xad
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02:25:19 Purge/Purse/Pug
Rogue
I've got 2 functional and a beat up hunk of trash from when I accidentally paid some love to the pavement XD
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02:25:07 Phoenix, Rogue
Katy,
Love it!
 SixBears
02:25:04 evebot
I just tried it. I didn't lose apples.
 Voxtexy
02:25:03 Vox, Corey
Oct 2, 2024 14:20:40 You spent 10 apples at The Wolf Party.

I've got all 4 of my tokens still, tried to use 2 of them before I realized my apples went from 16 to 6 lol
 Boo
02:24:52 Chrissy
tay,
same! i've got 40k saved now.
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02:24:49 katy | beetle
-Click-

finally finished the piece for rowan :'D
 Apothecary
02:24:30 Medicinally Autistic
I wish it was on halloween so I would have more time to prep.
 Everlasting Torment
02:24:17 Anubis, Samael
Since it says there not available
 Apothecary
02:24:16 Medicinally Autistic
17 wolf party coins, and 170k mushrooms, hopefully I can get something good from the event.

I literally can't wait ;-;
 Everlasting Torment
02:23:54 Anubis, Samael
Vox that was what I was confused with I don't have apples and it said I can't use it same with I can't use my tokens
 Rogue Whispers
02:23:52 Phoenix, Rogue
Purge,
Ooh, motorcycle helmet
I've got about 7 just sitting in my barn XD
 Voxtexy
02:23:49 Vox, Corey
Ahh, okay.

I kept my tokens and used up apples xD
 SixBears
02:23:38 evebot
Pretty sure you don't lose apples.
 starmutt
02:23:21 marsh | they/it
@Vox
no someone else had it happen too pretty sure its a glitch
 Boo
02:23:20 Chrissy
vox,
no, it's still a bit glitchy though.

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Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 02:29 PM


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https://i.postimg.cc/43BvHBPL/Determination.png

Can I get some critiques on the BG mostly? Something about it bothers me, just don't know what
And, yea, I realize there are no craters in the moon.
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 02:48 PM


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The mountains look a bit odd, since mountains have different shapes, not only a /\ as top ^^

The light seems like it's like seems to spill out, or it's the detail of the mountains, and you already mentioned the moon crates missing.
In my opinion the moon is a tad large but if ya liked it better this way, than it's fine!
But damn the details in this piece is insane, well done ;w;

Edited at January 27, 2019 02:51 PM by Neytrix
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 06:31 PM


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Thank you so much Dragon! I see what you mean by all your suggestions :) and I think I might need to lower the other eyebrow :3
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 07:05 PM


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Thank you Trixy!
Oof, considering I practically live in the mountains you'd think I know better :,)


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No problem. Yea, that would help too ^^

Edited at January 27, 2019 07:07 PM by Dragon's Fire
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 10:04 PM


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Better?
https://i.postimg.cc/rFGTnyHd/Noodle5.png
https://i.postimg.cc/MGzRgGtv/Noodle4.png

Edited at January 27, 2019 10:05 PM by B R A V E
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 10:50 PM


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Oof, those are so cute *.*
I literally can't see a single thing wrong with them!
Great job!

(Shoot, now I'm dying for some of your art XD)

Edited at January 27, 2019 10:51 PM by Dragon's Fire
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 11:04 PM


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Lol thank you so much! It means a lot coming from artists I look up to I just wish I could be more detailed in my fur. But I did open up a shop...that just got full but I do have a shop XD
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 28, 2019 02:04 PM


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Thank you, midnight demons, and thanks, Dragon's Fire, I know what you mean.
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 28, 2019 04:29 PM


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https://i.postimg.cc/DZ6XRXRB/Untitled41.jpg
Looking for some tips on this peice ^^
Wip for a contest

Also if you could try and physically show anatomy errors that would be Awsome!
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 28, 2019 06:48 PM


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Your background is amazing, I am horrible at backgrounds myself and appreciate the effort that goes into a good one.

I've drawn a draft for the two figures, and it would perfectly fit over that image, if you wanted to copy it as a layer and use it for reference.

Your legs are a bit boneless, but that's perfectly alright, and a commen mistake. The joints don't bend quite right, and are a bit over-extended. Your noses are a little droopy, and the heads, for the size of the animals, could be a bit too big, but that is more a choice of style than anything else.

Your tail is beautiful, even in draft form. It has a very natural position.

Wings never have to be accurate, unless they are on a bird, but I personally like to make the joints a bit more visible, to show the weight of a wing that size.

https://i.postimg.cc/6phHwty3/yjomh.png

I am far from great at anatomy myself, so feel free to dismiss my draft.

Edited at January 28, 2019 06:49 PM by Coyote

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