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Sound like bears are ganging up lol
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My haul from round 5. the first two were ones that stole my apples when I was trying to use my coins before it was fixed lmaoo

The other 3 I got with coins are not worth showing. I booted them from my pack instantly lmao
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'Dabbath' made me snort lmao
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Level 56 and 49 enemies on reset this is just cruel.
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Sabbath
I am sorry lol
You know how many times i actually write that before correcting lol

It had to slip one day XD
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I think Amy glitched XD
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Dabbath? Changing my name expeditiously omg
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Sabbath*
Missed*

I think i need to sleep soon lol
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RIP you will be misses
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I just found 11 grizzly bears on tiles right next to each other. I'm cooked.
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thank you Eve!
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just tested it and it works 👍
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Eve,
Honestly, you probably couldnt let us down. The fact that we have WP in general is amazing!
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03:30:04 Never/Nev
It works now, thank you Eve!
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Yay! I feel better. I didn't want to let you guys down.
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it's fixed for me now! <3
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03:29:26 Never/Nev
I see that Eve, but when I click it I get told that I don't have any tokens. Both aren't in my market den or a raffle. Once it takes me to round 5 I have to pay 5 apples. I can send screenshots if you'd like.
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Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:25 PM


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https://s2.postimg.org/cm6tysat5/Screen_Shot_2017-11-09_at_11.21.15_PM.png

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Edited at November 9, 2017 10:28 PM by Aphmau clan
Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:28 PM


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Not bad (\^-^/)
Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:29 PM


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It's not really that bad in all honesty.
The tail and maybe the front leg on the side we're viewing could use a little work maybe, though the tail could actually depend on the breed of cat the drawing is of.
But overall it's pretty good

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:30 PM by Destinations End
Criticism NeededNovember 10, 2017 01:28 AM


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The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:
Criticism NeededJanuary 1, 2018 09:11 PM


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Siarczek said:
The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:


This helps me out! Thank you
Criticism NeededJanuary 3, 2018 03:49 AM


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Aww so cool!

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