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MxM rp anyone? Pm me if interested!
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Qyu

i feel like I haven't seen you in forever how are you?
 ZEFHYR
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oh! I had to do a chore and missed the answer to my question (if there was one?) about the double Z's looking like zeros?
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 Starlight Meadow
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Does the event quest lvl mean the explore lvl?
 Qyusen
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:D thanks!!
 Zeraphia
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Qyu

That looks so good!
 technoblade
09:24:08 Lil Techy | Techno
Qyu

God I love your art so much!
 Lazy Kingdom
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-WP Click-
I thought he was 18 or 17 nope only 15 lmao
 Qyusen
09:21:51 Qyu - all pronouns
-Click-
Cleaning up lines is so much faster/easier than lining :D
 Azrael
09:21:02 Ash, Grim, Kaos
That sounds like me too. I want to get a ton of currency before the end of the month but I have no motivation. 🥲
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Ash

Good!
 TheFlyingKitten
09:20:22 Petri Dish/Sorceress
I'm kinda compelled to try and play Zoochosis at some point. It looks interesting.
 Lazy Kingdom
09:19:37 Lazy, Crazy Cat Lady
Note to self bandaids can fight back ;-;. I don't want to use bandaids anymore lmao
 The Amethyst
09:18:45 Dart
Ash

Indeed except the fact that I need to get 28k mush but I'm lazy as fuck
 Azrael
09:16:48 Ash, Grim, Kaos
Dart-
That's good!
 Zeraphia
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Boo

Oh for sure. The silver and chocolate only looks so good in very rare situations.
 The Amethyst
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Ash

Good!
 Boo
09:15:19 Chrissy
vah,
she looks much better now, thank you! the silver and chocolate mix was not it.

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Advise and CritiqueJune 25, 2019 04:58 PM


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I'm working on a Creature for my Adoptable and I got stuck on the eye mouth and how I should do the feathers on the wings any Advise and Critique would be amazing.
https://i.postimg.cc/nr1Lqhkh/IMG-3236.jpg
((Made by me duh))
Advise and CritiqueJune 25, 2019 05:06 PM


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The picture looks kind-of confusing to me, but I will try my best to give some critique!

- Add more of a. . . chest, I guess?
- Adjust the stomach and lower it
- Add the other side limbs (if they are there, I cannot see them >.<)
Advise and CritiqueJune 25, 2019 05:09 PM


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❦Amaris said:
The picture looks kind-of confusing to me, but I will try my best to give some critique!

- Add more of a. . . chest, I guess?
- Adjust the stomach and lower it
- Add the other side limbs (if they are there, I cannot see them >.<)


Thanks it's still a W.I.P so it's gonna be a little confusing.
Advise and CritiqueJune 25, 2019 05:16 PM


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The maw, or mouth, is a little boxy. Make it a little more narrow, since I can see this is a dragon-like design. Dragons normally have a slender physique, unless you want a bulky one. Then you'd have to shorten the muzzle and make it more broad. The upper.. joints? I dunno the word, but the more upper half of the limbs (arms, legs) are too.. beefy. Make them a little more slender. For the eyes, try something that's like an almond like shape. Eyes are normally almond shaped, in a way. Like an Ellipse, google if you don't know what it is. It's an Earth Science term. This is all I got for now, but as you progress I can add more critiques
Advise and CritiqueJune 25, 2019 06:56 PM


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Wolffang said:
The maw, or mouth, is a little boxy. Make it a little more narrow, since I can see this is a dragon-like design. Dragons normally have a slender physique, unless you want a bulky one. Then you'd have to shorten the muzzle and make it more broad. The upper.. joints? I dunno the word, but the more upper half of the limbs (arms, legs) are too.. beefy. Make them a little more slender. For the eyes, try something that's like an almond like shape. Eyes are normally almond shaped, in a way. Like an Ellipse, google if you don't know what it is. It's an Earth Science term. This is all I got for now, but as you progress I can add more critiques

Thanks

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