Wolf Play : Critique?
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 Amygdala
04:32:38 Amy/Anpmygdala
Techno
Jungle all the way

Dire
It also has 400 maternity and charisma
 OCCULTIST
04:32:12 Man Lover
boosts maternal & charisma to 400
 Amygdala
04:32:04 Amy/Anpmygdala
Techno
-Click-
Like this
 technoblade
04:31:44 Lil Techy | Techno
Moves Left: 2580

Jungle or Tundra?
 Dire Wolf Haven
04:30:00 Dire, DWH
that's all?
 Feiella
04:29:37 Fei the writer
Dire Wolf
A pretty pink wolf
 Dire Wolf Haven
04:28:14 Dire, DWH
what is an infatuation boost?
 Amygdala
04:26:59 Amy/Anpmygdala
Hehe...my little moster XD
I don't think i can make him even more IB at this point😅
 technoblade
04:26:40 Lil Techy | Techno
i need someone to make a visual guide for that bloodline
 Eno
04:26:18 
Amy,
That's a blood circle at that point
 Amygdala
04:25:51 Amy/Anpmygdala
Fei
I might have to retire him for space😅
Or should i breed him to his mother next year🤔

I love making monstrositys
 technoblade
04:25:07 Lil Techy | Techno
Amy

circle type bloodline
 Feiella
04:24:34 Fei the writer
that pup is cursed lol
 Amygdala
04:23:35 Amy/Anpmygdala
Chat
Behold the ulatimate IB pup XD
-WP Click-

Check his blodline if you dare
 Kingwolf
04:21:27 King
Tmnt 2012 rp anyone? Pm me, i play Mikey
 _Moonshadow_
04:20:54 Moon
Ollie
my socks have been knocked off
 technoblade
04:20:48 Lil Techy | Techno
Ky

I remember eve saying something mid month
 Amygdala
04:20:47 Amy/Anpmygdala
Ky
Most likely...wich gives me a whole month to stop spending mush and save up
 technoblade
04:20:31 Lil Techy | Techno
Ollie

I think the design would look good with some gear
 kycantina
04:19:29 ky
I'm theorizing it'll be on the 31st the same way the GB and infatuation boosts are only available on st Patrick's and Valentine's

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Critique?August 24, 2018 04:29 PM


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Heyo! I'm looking for some critique on this. It's a gift and I feel it's really off. Thanks!
https://s26.postimg.cc/wklv0qk7b/BCBE6_B40-6_C2_C-4710-840_E-525226233_B98.png?dl=1
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:40 PM


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It's so cute :0
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:47 PM


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Thanks!
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:47 PM


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Maybe put the frosting in front of the hedgehog, make it more centered-looking? It's a really great piece. Be proud!
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:49 PM


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TheAlphaPack said:
Maybe put the frosting in front of the hedgehog, make it more centered-looking? It's a really great piece. Be proud!

Ooh good idea, thanks!
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:49 PM


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It looks cute, my critique would be maybe make the cupcake cups bottom a little rounder ( more 3D ish ) and bring the topping to the foreground so itÂ’s in front of it unless it supposed to be on the other side

ThatÂ’s it I hoped I helped
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:51 PM


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starwolfs said:
It looks cute, my critique would be maybe make the cupcake cups bottom a little rounder ( more 3D ish ) and bring the topping to the foreground so it’s in front of it unless it supposed to be on the other side

That’s it I hoped I helped


You definitely did, thanks!
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:58 PM


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That's beautiful! And really cute :D
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:58 PM


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The frosting and the cherry seem to be layered pretty weirdly? Maybe try to make them look like they're each sitting on top of the other rather than behind it. ^^ I absolutely adore how you did the hedgehog though! :'D
Critique?August 24, 2018 05:01 PM


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The bottom half almost looks like it's in front of the quills on the top. Maybe make the quills that overlap the lighter half of the porcupine a bit longer, so that it's clear that the front half isn't sticking out in a way.

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