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 Eye of Eternity
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owlstar
i really like lettuce okay :( /silly
 Eye of Eternity
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jester
i wish 😔 i dont know if im allowed to eat it
i actually hate raw broccoli its such a gross texture
 Master Darkfire
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um...um...ok...
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Eternity
Do you eat whole things of it like popcorn too? I do that. Especially broccoli
 Eye of Eternity
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owlstar
...yeah?
 Master Darkfire
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 Eye of Eternity
11:15:18 tern | they/he
just found out that my mom has heads of lettuce in the fridge and im fighting demons not to unwrap one and eat like half of it
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Doodle
woah :o she looks epic
 Jester
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Trying to get at least one crushing strength outta my alphas pups eventually
 Doodle Dragon
11:14:24 He/They pronouns
River goes now, bye bye :3
 Doodle Dragon
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Paws?

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 Feiella
11:12:55 Pack of Sharp Snap
all the better once you don't get duds
 SouthernScorpion
11:11:31 Scorpion
I got all duds as well
 Jester
11:10:27 
I don't think they were offering but noted for the future! ^^
 Feiella
11:08:32 Pack of Sharp Snap
You can talk about pups you have. Just not discuss or ask/offer any breedings
 Jester
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Oh we aren't allowed to talk about pups we got? Sorry
 Feiella
11:05:04 Pack of Sharp Snap
Do not discuss/offer breeding in main chat please
 Jester
11:04:50 
Naurrrr not the duds
 Lurking shadows
11:01:28 
Ohh and Jester i bred my female with Eldslukare and still didnt get no hh
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 Eye of Eternity
11:18:55 tern | they/he
owlstar
i really like lettuce okay :( /silly
 Eye of Eternity
11:18:36 tern | they/he
jester
i wish 😔 i dont know if im allowed to eat it
i actually hate raw broccoli its such a gross texture
 Master Darkfire
11:18:19 Dark/fire/ice
um...um...ok...
 Jester
11:17:35 
Eternity
Do you eat whole things of it like popcorn too? I do that. Especially broccoli
 Eye of Eternity
11:17:29 tern | they/he
owlstar
...yeah?
 Master Darkfire
11:16:47 Dark/fire/ice
tern...
 Eye of Eternity
11:15:18 tern | they/he
just found out that my mom has heads of lettuce in the fridge and im fighting demons not to unwrap one and eat like half of it
 snake
11:14:59 
Doodle
woah :o she looks epic
 Jester
11:14:57 
Trying to get at least one crushing strength outta my alphas pups eventually
 Doodle Dragon
11:14:24 He/They pronouns
River goes now, bye bye :3
 Doodle Dragon
11:13:30 He/They pronouns
Paws?

-WP Click-
 Feiella
11:12:55 Pack of Sharp Snap
all the better once you don't get duds
 SouthernScorpion
11:11:31 Scorpion
I got all duds as well
 Jester
11:10:27 
I don't think they were offering but noted for the future! ^^
 Feiella
11:08:32 Pack of Sharp Snap
You can talk about pups you have. Just not discuss or ask/offer any breedings
 Jester
11:06:34 
Oh we aren't allowed to talk about pups we got? Sorry
 Feiella
11:05:04 Pack of Sharp Snap
Do not discuss/offer breeding in main chat please
 Jester
11:04:50 
Naurrrr not the duds
 Lurking shadows
11:01:28 
Ohh and Jester i bred my female with Eldslukare and still didnt get no hh
 Jester
10:59:45 
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Critique?July 30, 2018 05:59 AM


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I was just messing around and I made this:
https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png
And this:
https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png
If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background
I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie
Critique?July 30, 2018 02:36 PM


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Horse
I can't see it
But the D ring for your bit is way too big
And the rest of the bridle is way to small
Critique?July 30, 2018 02:46 PM


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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.
https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or
https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png
(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:
Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:
https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.
There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°
Critique?July 30, 2018 03:58 PM


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Thanks Astro and Midnight!
The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black
I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.
I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD
Critique?July 30, 2018 06:33 PM


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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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