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I had one where two twins were flirting with each other 0.o
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shadow hunts a deer with callie at their side.
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mother daughter bonding time??

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The Dark Day sniffs under a bush and finds Bead Necklace!
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Looks like someone finally decided to be useful

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ooo

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-WP Click-

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>.< so weird!!!!!!!!!!!!

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You would think that they would be at the schools that have had one

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It's true I looked it up.
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Another person saying 'ez' after I die, but really, was it is?
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There were many a high school lockdowns in 2016 due to clowns XD

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east wait what?!?!?!

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moon...um...ok...another stupid hoax...

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Moon
Oooo her pups are going to be beautiful!

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Dude, someone told me that there's a high school in the area that has police officers armed with machine guns!

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Kids these days, anything to get out of school. Back in my day…we had killer clowns XD

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01:17:43 Dark/fire/ice

dawn >.<

01:16:37 Dawn (She/her)

Yeah it was Kalea and Nakoa. TWINS

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dawn AYYY YOOOOO

01:11:21 Dawn (She/her)

Dark
I had one where two twins were flirting with each other 0.o
I was like "HOLD UP BUDDY"

01:10:35 East

Dark
Aww!

01:09:46 Dark/fire/ice

shadow hunts a deer with callie at their side.
Stats: Battle +3
Affinity: Strong Like
Mood: Excited
mother daughter bonding time??

01:09:00 East

The Dark Day sniffs under a bush and finds Bead Necklace!
Stats: Luck +3
Mood: Triumphant
Leaderboard: +5 Points

Looks like someone finally decided to be useful

01:07:35 Dark/fire/ice

ooo

01:07:17 Andromeda

-WP Click-

Ooo

01:07:00 Dark/fire/ice

>.< so weird!!!!!!!!!!!!

01:06:01 East

You would think that they would be at the schools that have had one

01:04:58 East

It's true I looked it up.
And there wasn't even a shooting in that one!

Wild Runners

01:04:47 Stalking chat

Another person saying 'ez' after I die, but really, was it is?
Because I literally almost killed you 5 times so was it?

01:04:34 Andromeda

Dark
There were many a high school lockdowns in 2016 due to clowns XD

01:04:01 Dark/fire/ice

east wait what?!?!?!

01:03:00 Dark/fire/ice

moon...um...ok...another stupid hoax...

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Moon
Oooo her pups are going to be beautiful!

Serpents

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anyone up for an rp pm me please im bored

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Dude, someone told me that there's a high school in the area that has police officers armed with machine guns!

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Kids these days, anything to get out of school. Back in my day…we had killer clowns XD

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM