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retire? she keeps giving bad pups
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You're forced to get up early too :')

Nothing is more petty than being forced to take family pictures of the entire family (excluding you) and then sending a selfie and saying "A pic of the camera man since she didn't get to take pics with the family"

Very passive aggressive. I felt very bad after I sent it but I could exactly unsend it :|
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Need critics!November 4, 2017 10:49 PM


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So lately I've been trying to get out of drawing cartoony cats. I've been trying to add more detail (which i need work on ;;) But can someone give my picture some tips?

https://kyothered.deviantart.com/art/Eden-713461234?ga_submit_new=10%3A1509853258

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kyothered on DA ^^
Need critics!November 19, 2017 06:19 PM


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I love the style and colouring! I just think you need to work on the head shape as it looks a tad bit more canine than feline. Otherwise, amazing work!
Need critics!December 18, 2017 08:16 PM


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Needs whiskers and the snout thingy looks too canine-ish
Need critics!December 29, 2017 04:10 PM


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The snout needs to be a little less narrow and much smaller. The ears might have to be a little bit bigger. Other than that it's pretty awesome! ^-^
Need critics!December 29, 2017 05:53 PM


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The way the fur goes on the neck - there's a part where it parts a little unnaturally, like somebody's parted it with a comb. Unless they're a housecat, I suggest that you fix that. I assume that you mean for the eyes to be shaped that way, since it's a cartoon-style drawing, but still, maybe they should be rotated more south-westward. As others have said, the snout is not a feline's; it lacks the whisker points, jowls, and softer/fatter jawline of a feline. Perhaps the ears should be a little more pointy. But all in all, it's pretty good! The coloring and background flatter the shape nicely, and said colors don't contrast overall, so it finishes cleanly. Just work on the anatomy a little more, and it would overall be pretty perfect.

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