Wolf Play : Advise and Critique

10:23:48 He/They pronouns

Aww poor Cinn, Cinn can get food soon

Black Dawn Den

10:22:57 Dawn (She/her)

Vax
Oh no! I hope everything ends up okay. I'm really sorry >.<

10:22:44 Cinn / Ace

Vax
aw nooo D:
(cinn almost put open smiley oops)

Vax

10:22:01 a rock in your shoe

alright chat, update on my shoulder:
yes, it is dislocated, and two, i went to the doctor and my ciculatory system isn't working correctly so i need to get blood work done next week :(

10:21:58 Cinn / Ace

cinn's head and stomach hurts :(
cinn blames it on the pringle cinn's friend gave cinn, not the fact that cinn just wants food

10:21:48

I thought something was weird about them but I didn't want people coming after me lol

10:21:10

oh wow

10:20:37

They kept switching to their other account claiming it was their sister an they messed up and @d themselves

Serpents

10:20:08 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

i really want to fucking Kill my laptop for doing some updattig thing now my tabs reload and some brake....

10:19:57

what

10:18:43

jester

what happened last time? I left when every1 was comforting them.

10:17:18

-_-

10:17:00

Moonfall
ok im having chest pain and i had a cuncushen on tusday

10:16:54 He/They pronouns

Cinn,
Yeah, River knows ^^

Love Story,
Doodle is good, how about Love story?

Spicy Star

10:16:46 Starlight

moon dont worry about it

Moonfall

10:16:00 Many moons, one me

Dawn, Spicy, Apologies for the length of that
Love, I'd love to help today, but I'll be a bit busy myself trying not to have one

10:15:57

The last time you were having a panic attack

10:15:33

jester

OMG THAT WAS FAKE????

10:15:12 Cinn / Ace

DD
challenge is actually easier than challenge looks after person figures out what not to use

10:15:07

Doodle Dragon
how are you

Jester
what

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10:23:48 He/They pronouns

Aww poor Cinn, Cinn can get food soon

Black Dawn Den

10:22:57 Dawn (She/her)

Vax
Oh no! I hope everything ends up okay. I'm really sorry >.<

10:22:44 Cinn / Ace

Vax
aw nooo D:
(cinn almost put open smiley oops)

Vax

10:22:01 a rock in your shoe

alright chat, update on my shoulder:
yes, it is dislocated, and two, i went to the doctor and my ciculatory system isn't working correctly so i need to get blood work done next week :(

10:21:58 Cinn / Ace

cinn's head and stomach hurts :(
cinn blames it on the pringle cinn's friend gave cinn, not the fact that cinn just wants food

10:21:48

I thought something was weird about them but I didn't want people coming after me lol

10:21:10

oh wow

10:20:37

They kept switching to their other account claiming it was their sister an they messed up and @d themselves

Serpents

10:20:08 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

i really want to fucking Kill my laptop for doing some updattig thing now my tabs reload and some brake....

10:19:57

what

10:18:43

jester

what happened last time? I left when every1 was comforting them.

10:17:18

-_-

10:17:00

Moonfall
ok im having chest pain and i had a cuncushen on tusday

10:16:54 He/They pronouns

Cinn,
Yeah, River knows ^^

Love Story,
Doodle is good, how about Love story?

Spicy Star

10:16:46 Starlight

moon dont worry about it

Moonfall

10:16:00 Many moons, one me

Dawn, Spicy, Apologies for the length of that
Love, I'd love to help today, but I'll be a bit busy myself trying not to have one

10:15:57

The last time you were having a panic attack

10:15:33

jester

OMG THAT WAS FAKE????

10:15:12 Cinn / Ace

DD
challenge is actually easier than challenge looks after person figures out what not to use

10:15:07

Doodle Dragon
how are you

Jester
what

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June 25, 2019 04:58 PM

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I'm working on a Creature for my Adoptable and I got stuck on the eye mouth and how I should do the feathers on the wings any Advise and Critique would be amazing.

https://i.postimg.cc/nr1Lqhkh/IMG-3236.jpg

((Made by me duh))

June 25, 2019 05:06 PM

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The picture looks kind-of confusing to me, but I will try my best to give some critique!

- Add more of a. . . chest, I guess?

- Adjust the stomach and lower it

- Add the other side limbs (if they are there, I cannot see them >.<)

June 25, 2019 05:09 PM

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❦Amaris said:
The picture looks kind-of confusing to me, but I will try my best to give some critique!

- Add more of a. . . chest, I guess?
- Adjust the stomach and lower it
- Add the other side limbs (if they are there, I cannot see them >.<)

Thanks it's still a W.I.P so it's gonna be a little confusing.

June 25, 2019 05:16 PM

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The maw, or mouth, is a little boxy. Make it a little more narrow, since I can see this is a dragon-like design. Dragons normally have a slender physique, unless you want a bulky one. Then you'd have to shorten the muzzle and make it more broad. The upper.. joints? I dunno the word, but the more upper half of the limbs (arms, legs) are too.. beefy. Make them a little more slender. For the eyes, try something that's like an almond like shape. Eyes are normally almond shaped, in a way. Like an Ellipse, google if you don't know what it is. It's an Earth Science term. This is all I got for now, but as you progress I can add more critiques

June 25, 2019 06:56 PM