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AS, I think it's pretty good to be quite honest. I quite like the clouds and the reflections on the water |
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Eyy almost got me textures done xD: |
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Hmph, all i need to know is. does this look okay? and can you comment on my last peice that i did. |
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Hmm I feel like I butchered everythin now... |
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x Nights Touch x said:
Hmph, all i need to know is. does this look okay?
It's cute, but again, I would suggest looking up multiple images, for this example, of cats. So it could be more anatomically correct. |
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Lansnow said:
Hmm I feel like I butchered everythin now...
I think you're fine in that department. The second one looks as good as the first one, and the background is to simple to butcher. |
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ASomeonePerson said
Anyway, have a look at this practice piece I made based on my memory of a tutorial I watched the other night: Can't really help with the background department, that much, but I'll try. I think the water looks neither wavy nor calm. Like I can't distinguishe how it flows, you know? I don't know if that makes sense. Again, this is my personal feedback and not a critique of sort. |
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Lansnow said:
But the fish tho >.>
Well, now this opinion is a matter of style. How I would continue is with a light source and polish the remaining art. Like the light bouncing of the scales and things like that. But the anatomy I would say is dope. ^^' |
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