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Declined. Not enough detail. Reread the Rules. Image is not Stock Image. Island Lover said: Character Sheet Name: Piper Age: 4 years of age Gender: Mare Rank: Lead Mare Appearance: -mod edit: removed- Piper only stands at 14h and weighs around 800 pounds. Her eyes are a deep dark brown. Personality: Piper is a sweet little thing but she is also deterimned to take her role as lead mare very seriously, she wants to be a loving shoulder her herdmates can cry on, she wants to be strong so they will respect her. She wants to love and be loved by her lead male and any future foals they will have Weakness: Piper is sweet, too sweet. She doesn't like to see the bad in anyone, she also wants to understand other horse's situations, this causes her to not see rouge studs as too much of a threat. She's also pretty short so she can't jump high. Strengths: Piper never gives up, she is always determined, works hard and usually, she gets the jobs done. Being the mustang she is, her body is built for harsh conditions, she can travel far and without food for days on end. She is also great at climbing hills and moutains. Foal (If you have one): Other: Interesting facts about horses: All "wild"horses are actually feral breeds. The only true wild horse is the "Przewalski"
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Island Lover said: Character Sheet Name: Piper Age: 4 years of age Gender: Mare Rank: Lead Mare Appearance: Credits:Deirdre-T@DA Piper only stands at 14h and weighs around 800 pounds. Her eyes are a deep dark brown. She is a kiger mustang specifically with a buckskin coating. Her legs are black coated. Personality: Piper has always been in this herd, she was her mother's daighter but unfortunately, her mother passed only two years after Piper was born due to the changing conditions. Piper was lifted up by her fellow herdmates so now she wants to do the same for them. She has been dedicated to helping mothers raise their foals, helping them during these harsh times. Most of all Piper just wants peace, for her, for them, for everyone, she doesn't think its too much to ask. Piper's sweetness can sometimes fail her, she has been taken advantage of before and has learned her lesson, she didn't allow this to destory her though, she learned that its okay to be trusting of others, you just have to be smart and reasonable about it as well. Piper takes her role as lead mare very seriously and she holds that title with pride. She wants to be strong so they will respect her. She wants to love and be loved by her lead male and any future foals they will have. Random Hoarse Facts: Piper really loves butterflies, she believes that if followed, they can shine the light to a brighter path, it was a old thing her mother used to say and she trust that till this day. Weakness: Piper is sweet, too sweet. She doesn't like to see the bad in anyone, she also wants to understand other horse's situations, this causes her to not see rouge studs as too much of a threat. She's also pretty short so she can't jump high. Strengths: Piper never gives up, she is always determined, works hard and usually, she gets the jobs done. She is also great at climbing hills and moutains. Foal (If you have one):
Hopefully fixed^^
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Declined. Your strengths and weaknesses to not match in size. Weakness and Strength must be equal, unless Weakness has more weaker attributes. Our horses are not superior. Island Lover said: Island Lover said: Character Sheet Name: Piper Age: 4 years of age Gender: Mare Rank: Lead Mare Appearance: Credits:Deirdre-T@DA Piper only stands at 14h and weighs around 800 pounds. Her eyes are a deep dark brown. She is a kiger mustang specifically with a buckskin coating. Her legs are black coated. Personality: Piper has always been in this herd, she was her mother's daighter but unfortunately, her mother passed only two years after Piper was born due to the changing conditions. Piper was lifted up by her fellow herdmates so now she wants to do the same for them. She has been dedicated to helping mothers raise their foals, helping them during these harsh times. Most of all Piper just wants peace, for her, for them, for everyone, she doesn't think its too much to ask. Piper's sweetness can sometimes fail her, she has been taken advantage of before and has learned her lesson, she didn't allow this to destory her though, she learned that its okay to be trusting of others, you just have to be smart and reasonable about it as well. Piper takes her role as lead mare very seriously and she holds that title with pride. She wants to be strong so they will respect her. She wants to love and be loved by her lead male and any future foals they will have. Random Hoarse Facts: Piper really loves butterflies, she believes that if followed, they can shine the light to a brighter path, it was a old thing her mother used to say and she trust that till this day. Weakness: Piper is sweet, too sweet. She doesn't like to see the bad in anyone, she also wants to understand other horse's situations, this causes her to not see rouge studs as too much of a threat. She's also pretty short so she can't jump high. Strengths: Piper never gives up, she is always determined, works hard and usually, she gets the jobs done. Being the mustang she is, her body is built for harsh conditions, she can travel far and without food for days on end. She is also great at climbing hills and moutains. Foal (If you have one):
Hopefully fixed^^
Edited at September 23, 2021 12:23 PM by Evermore
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Is this okay? Island Lover said: Island Lover said: Character Sheet Name: Piper Age: 4 years of age Gender: Mare Rank: Lead Mare Appearance: Credits:Deirdre-T@DA Piper only stands at 14h and weighs around 800 pounds. Her eyes are a deep dark brown. She is a kiger mustang specifically with a buckskin coating. Her legs are black coated. Personality: Piper has always been in this herd, she was her mother's daighter but unfortunately, her mother passed only two years after Piper was born due to the changing conditions. Piper was lifted up by her fellow herdmates so now she wants to do the same for them. She has been dedicated to helping mothers raise their foals, helping them during these harsh times. Most of all Piper just wants peace, for her, for them, for everyone, she doesn't think its too much to ask. Piper's sweetness can sometimes fail her, she has been taken advantage of before and has learned her lesson, she didn't allow this to destory her though, she learned that its okay to be trusting of others, you just have to be smart and reasonable about it as well. Piper takes her role as lead mare very seriously and she holds that title with pride. She wants to be strong so they will respect her. She wants to love and be loved by her lead male and any future foals they will have. Random Hoarse Facts: Piper really loves butterflies, she believes that if followed, they can shine the light to a brighter path, it was a old thing her mother used to say and she trust that till this day. Weakness: Piper is sweet, too sweet. She doesn't like to see the bad in anyone, she also wants to understand other horse's situations, this causes her to not see rouge studs as too much of a threat. She's also pretty short so she can't jump high. Strengths: Piper never gives up, she is always determined, works hard and usually, she gets the jobs done. She is also great at climbing hills and moutains. Foal (If you have one):
Hopefully fixed^^
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Accepted. Island Lover said: Is this okay? Island Lover said: Island Lover said: Character Sheet Name: Piper Age: 4 years of age Gender: Mare Rank: Lead Mare Appearance: Credits:Deirdre-T@DA Piper only stands at 14h and weighs around 800 pounds. Her eyes are a deep dark brown. She is a kiger mustang specifically with a buckskin coating. Her legs are black coated. Personality: Piper has always been in this herd, she was her mother's daighter but unfortunately, her mother passed only two years after Piper was born due to the changing conditions. Piper was lifted up by her fellow herdmates so now she wants to do the same for them. She has been dedicated to helping mothers raise their foals, helping them during these harsh times. Most of all Piper just wants peace, for her, for them, for everyone, she doesn't think its too much to ask. Piper's sweetness can sometimes fail her, she has been taken advantage of before and has learned her lesson, she didn't allow this to destory her though, she learned that its okay to be trusting of others, you just have to be smart and reasonable about it as well. Piper takes her role as lead mare very seriously and she holds that title with pride. She wants to be strong so they will respect her. She wants to love and be loved by her lead male and any future foals they will have. Random Hoarse Facts: Piper really loves butterflies, she believes that if followed, they can shine the light to a brighter path, it was a old thing her mother used to say and she trust that till this day. Weakness: Piper is sweet, too sweet. She doesn't like to see the bad in anyone, she also wants to understand other horse's situations, this causes her to not see rouge studs as too much of a threat. She's also pretty short so she can't jump high. Strengths: Piper never gives up, she is always determined, works hard and usually, she gets the jobs done. She is also great at climbing hills and moutains. Foal (If you have one):
Hopefully fixed^^
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Status: Undone, I will comment if I end this All in all, I decided that I would try again. . Name: Ygerna Age: 3 years Gender: Female Rank: Herd Mare . -mod edit: removed for nonstock- . Appearance: About 16 hands tall mostly white mare. She has black like smoke long tangled mane, delicate muzzle and medium length socks on all of her legs. A bit grayish on the neck and back due to many darker spots. Actually they are all over her body, but there are the most of them in those places . Mare has very dark brown eye with a wild spark of life in it. Some says they are totally completely black, others that dark honey. Ygerna herself can only say about this dispute that for sure she's far-sighted. . Female has light slim body with strongly defined muscles on her neck, front and legs. Her construction is very similar to the mustang, however she keeps her head very low. While walking usually stretches necks forward. She doesn't know why she does it. Maybe it's more comfortable for her, or it side effect of an unhealthy habit that she had as a foal. . Personality: A wild spirit hides in her. They say that Ygerna came from the west, looking for a freedom and independent. She wanted to do what whatever she wanted.. To be honest Ygerna feels a bit out of place there. Her attitude to others is mixed. She doesn't like a bit the main mare and even more lead stallion. It's mainly because of her feral and rebellious. She wants to make sure that no one would even think about treating her objectively and in advance. And if someone will decided to, she will make sure to show him (or her) that is wrong about her. . Mare calms that she isn't scared of anything. Nobody is able to stop her! Everything that will stand in her way will be overcome by her hooves! ... Not counting cliffs and sinkholes ... and maybe storms ... and maybe some bigger packs of wolves ... and maybe- . Ygerna can be truly emotional and caring time to time. She has a very high empathy and quickly becomes attached to others. That why she tries to protect others, and it hurts a lot to lose them for her. Mare prefers to hide this part of her. . Weakness: Sometimes selfish, she tries to do no see her own faults, she wouldn't be able to defeat more than one opponent at a time, never gives up . Strengths: Jumps really high, never gives up . Other: Open for plots! Hopes that now signup will be now ok, if it's too little can you give a minimum amount of words? It would be very helpful. Edited at September 23, 2021 10:04 AM by Destinations End
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Declined. Please use STOCK images from USABLE Sites. One more fault, and I will be accepting NO forms from you. Polarias said: Status: Undone, I will comment if I end this All in all, I decided that I would try again. . Name: Ygerna Age: 3 years Gender: Female Rank: Herd Mare . -mod edit: removed- . Appearance: About 16 hands tall mostly white mare. She has black like smoke long tangled mane, delicate muzzle and medium length socks on all of her legs. A bit grayish on the neck and back due to many darker spots. Actually they are all over her body, but there are the most of them in those places . Mare has very dark brown eye with a wild spark of life in it. Some says they are totally completely black, others that dark honey. Ygerna herself can only say about this dispute that for sure she's far-sighted. . Female has light slim body with strongly defined muscles on her neck, front and legs. Her construction is very similar to the mustang, however she keeps her head very low. While walking usually stretches necks forward. She doesn't know why she does it. Maybe it's more comfortable for her, or it side effect of an unhealthy habit that she had as a foal. . Personality: A wild spirit hides in her. They say that Ygerna came from the west, looking for a freedom and independent. She wanted to do what whatever she wanted.. To be honest Ygerna feels a bit out of place there. Her attitude to others is mixed. She doesn't like a bit the main mare and even more lead stallion. It's mainly because of her feral and rebellious. She wants to make sure that no one would even think about treating her objectively and in advance. And if someone will decided to, she will make sure to show him (or her) that is wrong about her. . Mare calms that she isn't scared of anything. Nobody is able to stop her! Everything that will stand in her way will be overcome by her hooves! ... Not counting cliffs and sinkholes ... and maybe storms ... and maybe some bigger packs of wolves ... and maybe- . Ygerna can be truly emotional and caring time to time. She has a very high empathy and quickly becomes attached to others. That why she tries to protect others, and it hurts a lot to lose them for her. Mare prefers to hide this part of her. . Weakness: Sometimes selfish, she tries to do no see her own faults, she wouldn't be able to defeat more than one opponent at a time, never gives up . Strengths: Jumps really high, never gives up . Other: Open for plots! Hopes that now signup will be now ok, if it's too little can you give a minimum amount of words? It would be very helpful.
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Name: Sirocco Age: 2 Gender: Female Rank: Herd Mare Appearance: (c) Colourize-Stock on DA Sirocco is an American Quarter Horse, and stands about 15.9hh, with a sleek, athletic build. Her legs are strong, and built for running. Her eyes are a beautiful blue, and her mane and tail are white, medium-length, and appear to float in the wind. Personality: Sirocco's personality is like an ocean. If you cath her at the right time, she is calm, nice, and friendly. Catch her at the wrong time and she's angry, uneased, like a tsunami waiting to happen. When provoked, the metaphorical tsunami in her releases. Some say she is almost like a fortune teller, who can predict a predator's moves. While this is not the case, she has trained her eyes and ears to detect these small changes that can give her a conclusion. Then she acts, the whole things already planned out in her mind. Sirocco can lash out like the angriest thing you've ever seen. Wild, raging energy courses through her veins as she proceeds to stomp you to a pulp. Adrenaline coursing through her veins, she is as unpredictable as a hurricane, thrashing and fighting, yet somehow still being able to use her skills to help her. She lacks maternal instinct. As a matter of fact, if she had a foal, another mare would end up taking care of it because she wouldn't even watch over it. She's a troublemaker and organizes all the trouble that the herd stallions get into, 80% of the time. And everytime something happens that involves the younger horses, it's usually pointed at Sirocco unless someone can actually vouch for her. Sirocco, despite being naughty and a bit of a burden, has somehow managed to gain the sympathy of the herd mares. Pretty sure it's because of how she was raised with an ignorant mother who let her get away with stuff. Weaknesses: Her self-esteem is small because a lot of the foals and younger horses like to pick on her. She finds things that the herd does on a daily basis 'boring' and craves for a wild adventure, fighting for her life in a battle against the impossible. She underestimates herself and her strengths. Lack of strength to hit hard blows, which is why she must be so agile to make up for this. She is blind in one eye so she has difficulty spotting predators, so she relies on her ears. She is an isolated horse, so she doesn't have a lot of friends. She tends to want to sneak off, like, a lot. She's a troublemaker, so she gets quite a bit of annoyed looks when she is found after running off again for the millionth time. Unpredictability. Quite the klutz, due to her one eye that works properly. She can't jump very well. Her 'brakes' don't necessarily work all that well. She thinks that the herd rules are trash and will go out of her way to break them on purpose. Strengths: Sirocco's ability to predict an opponents move. Agility, quick thinking. Unpredictability. Ability to hear small things like water and predators. Fast runner. Very good ears. She very strongly believes that she wasn't supposed to be born into this herd, and she was meant to be going on crazy adventures and making a name for herself in history. Other: I am open to plots, interactions, and even a lil romance! (I hope this is good, sorry if I made her a bit too 'Mary Sue' because I can change that) Edited at September 24, 2021 04:16 PM by Icy Wolves
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Declined. All you need to do is even out her weaknesses and strengths. If you could, a bit more to her personality would be great but not mandatory. Icy Wolves said: Name: Sirocco Age: 2 Gender: Female Rank: Herd Mare Appearance: (c) Colourize-Stock on DA Sirocco is an American Quarter Horse, and stands about 15.9hh, with a sleek, athletic build. Her legs are strong, and built for running. Her eyes are a beautiful blue, and her mane and tail are white, medium-length, and appear to float in the wind. Personality: Sirocco's personality is like an ocean. If you cath her at the right time, she is calm, nice, and friendly. Catch her at the wrong time and she's angry, uneased, like a tsunami waiting to happen. When provoked, the metaphorical tsunami in her releases. Some say she is almost like a fortune teller, who can predict a predator's moves. While this is not the case, she has trained her eyes and ears to detect these small changes that can give her a conclusion. Then she acts, the whole things already planned out in her mind. Sirocco can lash out like the angriest thing you've ever seen. Wild, raging energy courses through her veins as she proceeds to stomp you to a pulp. Adrenaline coursing through her veins, she is as unpredictable as a hurricane, thrashing and fighting, yet somehow still being able to use her skills to help her. Weaknesses: Always striving to be the best, even if it takes her to great extremes or gets her injured. She finds things that the herd does on a daily basis 'boring' and craves for a wild adventure, fighting for her life in a battle against the impossible. She overestimates herself and her strengths. Lack of strength to hit hard blows, which is why she must be so agile to make up for this. Strengths: Sirocco's ability to predict an opponents move. Agility, quick thinking. Unpredictability in battle. Ability to hear small things like water and predators. Fast runner. High jumper. Other: I am open to plots, interactions, and even a lil romance! (I hope this is good, sorry if I made her a bit too 'Mary Sue' because I can change that)
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